ext_6603 ([identity profile] halfshellvenus.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] scribblinlenore 2005-11-12 06:41 am (UTC)

Incredible story.

You turned Sam's dreams of normalcy inside-out so well, and there are more good lines than I can quote.

Nothing that gave off the scent of nightmares was worth saving. I like, because I interpret that as Dean saving Sam from the smell in Dean's clothes and what it might trigger.

I loved the description of Sam eating Cocoa Puffs and watching cereal, and how he almost celebrates it as being like any other kid.

And Dean following Mr. Parsons around constantly, feeling slightly hung-over from the tedium of Mr. Parson's life.

Great writing, and a great story.

Dean's more savvy than he gives himself credit for.


Post a comment in response:

(will be screened)
(will be screened if not validated)
If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting

If you are unable to use this captcha for any reason, please contact us by email at support@dreamwidth.org