ext_14075 ([identity profile] slinkling.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] scribblinlenore 2006-12-05 06:38 pm (UTC)

Wow. That was just brutal. Heart-stompingly gorgeous, and the last line makes me ache. I find myself wishing -- as I'm sure both characters do -- that this whole piece could slow down, that if this is all they/we are going to get, it could be drawn out enough to let us savor every detail.

Man, this one's really going to stay with me for a long time.

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