ext_2781 ([identity profile] incidental-fire.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] scribblinlenore 2007-12-12 03:34 am (UTC)

Oh my God. I love this fic to teeny tiny little pieces! I used to watch The Twelve Dancing Princesses on Fairy Tale Theatre *incessantly*, so the very idea of this fic made me squeal for joy, and reading it was even better. :)

I loved how flustered and tounge-tied Rodney got around John, and how obvious John was. The way that you used the Ancient labs instead of the dancing circle was really clever (though the idea of John going through fancy shoes every night was also amusing). And the very idea of Rodney McKay submerging his curiosity - mind-boggling!

Rodney tried to focus on his ledger sheet, but Sheppard was a good-smelling distraction, and the numbers blurred on the page.

Ah yes, many of us feel this way around John, even when we can't smell him!

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