ext_41380 ([identity profile] brighteyed-jill.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] scribblinlenore 2008-06-16 03:19 am (UTC)

What a fabulous little twist on the whole Ruby/Dean/Sam triangle. Hot and lovely. And I especially liked this line:
She lowers her voice into the octave of secrets and seduction.
And this:
Don't tell me you don't want a piece of this. I mean, sure, you've touched him. To wash off blood. Put bandaids on his boo-boos. But you haven't ever had him like this. Ruby traces her thumbs across Dean's collarbone, down to his nipples, scratching lightly at them with her nails. Have you, Sammy?
You've really got Ruby's voice down. And Dean recognizing Sam in her body, and continuing anyway... Guh. The hot.

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