ext_8738 ([identity profile] pun.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] scribblinlenore 2008-07-04 08:51 pm (UTC)

This is beyond fantastic! You're right that I was slightly skeptical of women's underwear, but you had me convinced by the time Derek was admiring Alex's long legs, and them him stroking the undewear and asking how it feels was just GUH!!

And then the kissing was so, so SO romantic! It just blew me away with its sweetness. I love it when Derek admits how much he can't resist Alex.

Oh and when he can see that Alex is about to blurt out "I love you." That's so perfect! You know Alex would always have to say "I love you" after sex and probably often during. Every moment is just pitch perfect character wise.

And all the begging was so, so SO hot!

Considering how depressed I'm feeling about the Yankees right now this story was really, really, really just what I needed. It's so lovely!

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