I loved your story, Corinna. And kept meaning to send you feedback.

It had this great taut feeling, both the relationships and the action. I loved the sense in the story that Lex and Clark have had to work hard to stay together. That Clark's life as Superman can be overwhelming sometimes and Lex is still a control freak, even if he means well. (Bugging the elevator was a nice touch. *g*)

I very much enjoyed the banter between Lex and Lois. It's great to see a Lois who's tough, but not a shrew. Who's treated as something other than a threat to the Clex that has to be put in her place. And the senior citizens self-defense group made me smile. :)

Thanks for the great read!