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scribblinlenore ([personal profile] scribblinlenore) wrote2005-11-17 05:46 pm
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Today's kissing inspiration

This is from a sci-fi story in an anthology of erotica by women writers, my favorite story in the book, probably because it features a male pleasure slave and the female alien who uses him and then falls in the love with him. I've always been a sucker for a pleasure slave story! This kiss isn't so different than ones I've read in fan fiction, but I do just find it hot.

"The rush of pleasure filled me. My knees folded and I found myself kneeling in front of you. Your eyes were wide and faintly puzzled. Then you smiled and gathered my face in your hands. I could feel the shape of my skull, like a cup you brought to your lips. Your eyes closed as you kissed me, drinking deep. Your cool tongue bringing the taste of my own sex into my mouth."

--From "The House of the Twin Jewels" by Gayle Feyrer
in Erotic Interludes, Lonnie Barbach (ed.)

[identity profile] destina.livejournal.com 2005-11-17 11:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Didn't Gayle Feyrer used to be a fanfic writer? I think she was.

[identity profile] mecurtin.livejournal.com 2005-11-17 11:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh yes *indeedy*. One of the greatest of the original Kirk/Spock writers and artists. She really pushed the eroticism of the whole genre from the very start.

Conclusion: slashers do great kisses.

[identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com 2005-11-19 07:09 pm (UTC)(link)
That's cool! Actually there are m/m moments in this story. I can see the influence of fan ficiton in it. Definitely the hottest story in the book!

[identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com 2005-11-19 07:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, that's so cool! Her story is by far the best one in the book. Also, it does have m/m moments in it, too. Now that I'm thinking about it, I can definitely see the influence of fan fic in it.
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[identity profile] oxoniensis.livejournal.com 2005-11-18 12:10 am (UTC)(link)
I could feel the shape of my skull, like a cup you brought to your lips.

Wow, I just love that imagery!

[identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com 2005-11-19 07:10 pm (UTC)(link)
I do, too! That's the part of the quote that gets me to read it again and again. There's something harsh and erotic about it at the same time. Love it!

[identity profile] phoiniks.livejournal.com 2005-11-18 02:25 am (UTC)(link)
I've always been a sucker for a pleasure slave story!

*eg* who doesn't ?

[identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com 2005-11-19 07:10 pm (UTC)(link)
No one I know! *g*