I have to say that I love the way that you write Shawn and Jordan, I would really love to see you write them more.
Destiny is such a strong word, and you can almost envision Jordan watching him, waiting for the exact right moment to approach him again. Making sure he has all the right words to say this time to make him not turn and walk away again.
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Date: 2005-10-11 01:58 am (UTC)I have to say that I love the way that you write Shawn and Jordan, I would really love to see you write them more.
Destiny is such a strong word, and you can almost envision Jordan watching him, waiting for the exact right moment to approach him again. Making sure he has all the right words to say this time to make him not turn and walk away again.
Wonderful job!