There are so many things, details about this part that make me so very happy it is beyond simple comment. But I'll try.
To get more objective impression, I decided to sleep on it and re-read it, but there is no change. I adore it, not just love it, adore how the tension and doom and love is building up. You are going to break our hearts in million little pieces and we are going to love every moment of it. And then hopefully you'll put them together again. You really should write your own fiction, you'd be rich!!!
Reference to Alicia, Lex surfing USDA site, image of the two learning about winemaking (!!!!!!!!! I love you so so much!!!!!!!!!!Very probable that I'm the only one being ridiculously happy about it, but the level of happy is so high that I make up for 10, ;-).), Chloe, Pete, the coooking!!!!!!!!! "...Have I always liked to cook?" "Since I've known you." and "That's one of the things that made me fall in love with you," he finds himself saying. *G* Never underestimate the power of cooking ability. It's the sexiest thing ever. Clark making up stories - damn, he learned a thing or two about lying, didn't he? And then at the end them both being barefoot, Lex leading him to bed by hand, snuggles to him!!!
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Date: 2005-05-13 07:10 am (UTC)To get more objective impression, I decided to sleep on it and re-read it, but there is no change. I adore it, not just love it, adore how the tension and doom and love is building up. You are going to break our hearts in million little pieces and we are going to love every moment of it. And then hopefully you'll put them together again. You really should write your own fiction, you'd be rich!!!
Reference to Alicia, Lex surfing USDA site, image of the two learning about winemaking (!!!!!!!!! I love you so so much!!!!!!!!!!Very probable that I'm the only one being ridiculously happy about it, but the level of happy is so high that I make up for 10, ;-).),
Chloe, Pete, the coooking!!!!!!!!!
"...Have I always liked to cook?" "Since I've known you." and "That's one of the things that made me fall in love with you," he finds himself saying.
*G* Never underestimate the power of cooking ability. It's the sexiest thing ever.
Clark making up stories - damn, he learned a thing or two about lying, didn't he? And then at the end them both being barefoot, Lex leading him to bed by hand, snuggles to him!!!
Thank you. Seriously.