This is excellent. What a perfect, consistent, true voice you gave Kirsten. And I love how it flowed so organically from her contemplating her motives for helping Ryan, to her own fears and dissatisfactions, and back to Ryan again. Lovely.
You have inspired me to go do my laundry now. That probably makes no sense whatsoever, but believe me when I say that that is no mean accomplishment.*g*
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Date: 2003-09-02 08:41 am (UTC)You have inspired me to go do my laundry now. That probably makes no sense whatsoever, but believe me when I say that that is no mean accomplishment.*g*