Hee, I love the author's note, because I was worried about Rodney, but I really love the idea of John getting Rodney's help for more experimentation.
That said? This was scorchingly hot. John as Teyla's and Elizabeth's plaything has a lot of appeal (hell, John as anyone's plaything has appeal), and you wrote it wonderfully. I loved your take on Teyla and Elizabeth and their relationship. Those two need more love.
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Date: 2006-07-16 02:59 am (UTC)That said? This was scorchingly hot. John as Teyla's and Elizabeth's plaything has a lot of appeal (hell, John as anyone's plaything has appeal), and you wrote it wonderfully. I loved your take on Teyla and Elizabeth and their relationship. Those two need more love.