this was really hot and delicious. and your john characterization was really fun, with his contemplation of chocolate pudding etc.
this:
He jerked his jacket off and peeled his shirt up over his head and was pleased to see that Rodney held the same dim view of clothing, shucking his pants and kicking them away as if they'd personally offended him.
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Date: 2007-06-24 07:34 pm (UTC)this:really cracked me up.