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So I'm having much fun with this meme.The lovely [livejournal.com profile] valentinemichel gave me the title "Bubblegum," and asked for Jared/Tom. This got too long for the comments, so I'm posting it here. A word of warning to Tommy fans, he came out a little dark.



Bubblegum
By Lenore

Tom will give Vancouver this: when spring finally comes, it's really something, all blue sky and cotton candy clouds and lemon drop sun. He does have to wonder whose bright idea it was to play baseball on a precious Saturday off, Smallville cast and crew versus Supernatural, winner gets bragging rights and a round of beer at their bar of choice, a complete waste of time if you ask Tom. It must have been some brainstorm of the PR department. He can picture it now, a bunch of suits sitting around, drinking lattes, dreaming up ways to whore them all out just a little bit more. Supernatural did recently move to Thursdays after Smallville. They must have figured it would be the perfect photo op, only Tom hasn't seen a single camera yet. Everyone who's watching the game, he's pretty sure, came with someone who's playing in it. No one is scribbling notes. The PR stunt that wasn't.

Or maybe this was all Mike's covert finagling, and he's actually managed to keep a secret for once. Tom isn't sure which possibility would be more annoying.

The Smallville team voted Tom their pitcher because he played some high school ball. Not all that well, he'd tried to tell them, but they insisted anyway. He walked four batters in the first inning alone, even Tessa the makeup girl who held the bat like a snake that might bite her.

Mike being Mike handed Tom a beer when they got back to the dugout. "So you're a little rusty. Hang with 'em."

Four innings later, and Tom has figured out the strike zone at least. He throws a slow curve, and the guy at the plate, Bill or Bart or something like that, one of the electricians on the other show, flails at it, way out in front.

"Strike three!" the ump calls.

Bill slinks back to the dugout. One more out to go, but there's nobody on deck, because Jared is due up next, and he's sitting at the far end of the bench horsing around with Jensen as usual. If they're not already fucking each other, Tom feels sure, they will be soon enough.

"JT, get your ass up there!" one of his teammates yells at him.

Jared looks honestly startled. "It's my turn already?" He gropes around under the bench for his helmet.

Jensen hands him a bat. "Make me proud."

Jared lopes up to the plate. "Sorry," he tells Tom.

Tom stares in coldly. "If you had your mind on the game."

Jared shrugs, grinning, lifts the bat to his shoulder and blows a big, pink bubble with his gum. He's been doing that all damned day, like an exclamation point to everything that happens, when he reached base in the first on a walk, when he stole second in the third. That's Jared, all easy smiles, sun shining from his eyes, as if life, everything is just so utterly effortless. Tom knows that feeling. Or he once did, at least.

Tom winds up, delivers. The first pitch is high, the second a strike that Jared takes, the third a ball he swings at. Jared kicks at the dirt and laughs.

Jensen leans forward on the bench, clapping. "Ja-red!"

Tom grips the ball, considers the next pitch. He knows people talk about Jared as the new Tom Welling. "What does that make me," he complained to Mike, "the old Tom Welling?" Mike just grinned. "You're totally missing the point, dude. He's the poor man's version of you."

Tom hadn't been all that mollified.

He throws the next one high and tight, buzzing Jared at the helmet, making him lean back so far to get out of the way he ends up on his ass in the dirt. A collective gasp goes up, and Jensen flies off the bench, out to the mound, not surprisingly.

"What the fuck, Welling?" He gets right up in Tom's face.

Mike jogs in from short to play peacemaker. "Boys, boys, a little decorum please. Tom's not exactly Roger Clemens out here, Jen. That one just got away from him." He looks at Tom pointedly. "Isn't that right, Tommy?"

Tom shrugs. "It slipped."

For a moment, Jensen looks like he might push the issue, but then Jared calls out, "Hey, Jen, it's okay." Jensen reluctantly heads back to the dugout.

Most guys who get knocked on their ass are determined to hit the next pitch to Saturn, but Jared has his own ideas. He lays down a bunt, not a particularly good one, but then, nobody's expecting it. Tom overthrows Alison at first, and Jared ends up on second, blowing bubbles as he slides into base, like he's Derek freaking Jeter. The Supernatural team goes on to win 6-2, and Tom takes it personally.

They all pick up their gear and head off to the locker room. Jared and Jensen fall in together, and Tom and Mike trail behind. Jensen's shoulders are still a rigid line of not happy. He spent the last three innings glaring at Tom like he wished looks really could kill. Jared bumps his shoulder playfully to get him to relax. Jensen turns his head, and Jared grins. Tom knows that too, believing that a smile can make everything better. It doesn't of course, he knows that all too well now, and there's a part of him that wants to force that ugly truth on Jared, wants to hold up his divorce decree as proof.

Steam is already fogging up the mirrors when Tom makes it to the locker room. He strips and showers and gets dressed. By the time he's finished, it's only him and Mike, Jared and Jensen left. Everyone else has already headed off to O'Malley's for celebratory Molsons.

Mike drapes an arm over Jensen's shoulders. "What say we leave the kids to work things out among themselves?"

Jensen looks to Jared, and Jared nods.

When he and Tom are alone, he says, "Hey, man, no hard feelings, huh?"

His expression is the last straw, all quiet assurance, like there's a script for this moment, and he knows exactly what's coming next. Tom believed that once too, and it's all gone to shit ever since. This isn't Jared's fault strictly speaking, but he's here and he's convenient, and Tom's always been a little bit of a son of a bitch.

He closes the distance, shoves his fingers into Jared's hair and pulls too hard, pushes him bodily against the wall with enough force that there's a soft thud when Jared hits the cinderblocks. Sparks fly in Jared's eyes, like he's ready for a fight if that's what this is coming to, and Tom uses the element of surprise to his advantage, sinks to knees, opens Jared's pants with both hands.

A strangled sound comes out of Jared as Tom lifts his cock in his hand, circles his tongue around the head. It feels like a triumph that Jared gets hard at his touch, and Tom sets out to dazzle, puts to work all the dirty tricks he learned getting where he is now. He remembers in too much detail the first time he gave some photographer an obligatory blowjob. Just a catalogue shoot, but back then, it seemed like a huge break. The photographer smelled like sweat and cigarettes, and he twined an arm around Tom's waist when he said, "This could lead to big things. Maybe you want to show some appreciation."

Tom feels certain that Jared knows nothing about shit like this, and it makes him work him over all the more ruthlessly. Jared curls his hands into fists, pounds them against the unforgiving wall, like he doesn't want to do it, doesn't want Tom to win. Tom pushes a finger behind Jared's balls, strokes the soft skin there, and Jared never had a chance.

Even after he's come, Jared's chest continues to heave, his eyes wide and unfocused, like he doesn’t know what just hit him. Tom gets to his feet, in no particular hurry. He gives Jared a lazy smile. "See you at O'Malley's."

He saunters to the door. He knows none of this is really about Jared. It's just easier than being mad at the world. Tom whistles all the way out to the street. Sometimes being a son of a bitch can be damned convenient.

Date: 2006-02-26 03:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] itjustsaysnow.livejournal.com
Interesting. I enjoyed it muchly. *G*

This quartet is fast becoming one of my favorite guilty pleasures.

Date: 2006-02-26 03:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Writing Tom against type was fun. Plus, bubblegum makes me think of baseball, and thinking of baseball is always good!

Glad you liked this, doll. And I totally agree. This is my new OT4! :)

Date: 2006-02-26 03:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] supergrover24.livejournal.com
Oh, mean Tom! YES. I like this!

And wait. SPN is on Thursdays? Starting when? After Beauty and the Geek ends?

Date: 2006-02-26 03:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Since [livejournal.com profile] ethrosdemon invented mean!Tommy, I have loved him so. It was so much fun making him not only a pissy bitch, but a bad baseball player. *g*

And wait. SPN is on Thursdays? Starting when? After Beauty and the Geek ends?

This is the word on my flist. I guess maybe I'll start watching Smallville again, after all.

Date: 2006-02-26 03:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ethrosdemon.livejournal.com
DID YOU SAY DARK TOM???????????????????

Tom will give Vancouver this: when spring finally comes, it's really something, all blue sky and cotton candy clouds and lemon drop sun.

Well, you had me at hello. God, lenore, you are so good. Just SO good. I'm always in awe.

One more out to go, but there's nobody on deck, because Jared is due up next, and he's sitting at the far end of the bench horsing around with Jensen as usual. If they're not already fucking each other, Tom feels sure, they will be soon enough.

Man, hateful Tom is my bulletproof, period. I love this guy. Bitch it up, Tommy.

JT! The love.

Tom stares in coldly. "If you had your mind on the game."

That's right, my precious diva, haught at them.

He's been doing that all damned day, like an exclamation point to everything that happens, when he reached base in the first on a walk, when he stole second in the third. That's Jared, all easy smiles, sun shining from his eyes, as if life, as if everything is just so utterly effortless.

Um, see the thing about WBrps? I LOVE them all. All the time. When people can write the hell out of them like you can. Just plain ol' YES.

He knows people talk about Jared as the new Tom Welling.

Um. Holy shit. Tom with that knowledge? BRUTAL. Tommy will fuck your shit up, yo.

"You're totally missing the point, dude. He's the poor man's version of you."

Tom hadn't been all that mollified.


So, did I mention that I fangirl you out the ass? No? Well, guess what? I DO.

OH Jens, OH Mike. My GOD. Ok, this fic is the shit.

Uh oh, Tommy takes it personally. Bad for the world.

It doesn't of course, he knows that all too well now, and there's a part of him that wants to force that ugly truth on Jared, wants to hold up his divorce decree as proof.

Whoa, and you not only bring the Tommy I love and want to have a really dysfunctional relationship with, you bring the real. Kudos.

OH MY GOD. You just brought the Tom pov on all the shit I tried to write. Linking the hell out of this.

Date: 2006-02-26 04:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Dude, you INVENTED mean!Tommy, and yours will always be the best, a deliciously seductive psycho. *loves* Mine is more a pissy bitch--who can't throw a baseball. That's the part I enjoyed writing the most. *g*

Glad you liked this, doll!

Baseball's Been Very, Very Good to me

Date: 2006-02-26 04:19 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] valentinemichel.livejournal.com
Oh. Dear. Gawd.

*fans self*

There's something so appealing about Lolita!Jared just not getting it, and Tom, all experience and attitude and no (baseball) skills and (blowjob) skills aplenty...

*wibble*

Makes a gal just wanna go "I'll be in my bunk." *g*

Expertly rendered as always, m'dere. I somehow suspect had I given you "chaw" as a title, you'd still manage to delight.

Thanks so much for this!

Re: Baseball's Been Very, Very Good to me

Date: 2006-02-27 07:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I swear, when I think bubblegum the first thing that comes to mind is baseball. I think it's because Derek Jeter looks so pretty blowing bubbles while he's running the bases. *g*

Glad you liked this, Val! Thanks for the prompt and the pairing. It was much fun for me! :)

Nice pg-13 story

Date: 2006-02-26 04:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jared-loves-me.livejournal.com
Wow nice PG-13 story

Mean Tom, it is a nice story.
Maybe a NC-17 , Tom and Jensen story

Re: Nice pg-13 story

Date: 2006-02-27 07:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Hee. Well, I have downgraded it to R, but I can't see a blowjob being PG-13. *g*

Date: 2006-02-26 05:18 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] stormcloude
I like your take on Tommy-- he actually comes off as more worn down into the spite and just reacting to that more than anything.

Date: 2006-02-27 07:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I usually don't have much sympathy to spare for the travails of the beautiful people, but I can imagine that Tommy gets treated like everything should be perfect in his world, and when it's not, it just seems all the more bewildering. And I can also really imagine that having someone called the "new Tom Welling" would be really hard to take.

Should make for some interesting evenings when they four of them go out together! *g*

Date: 2006-02-26 05:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] onelittlesleep.livejournal.com
fuck fuck fuck...

*cries*

You make a girl feel like she's drowning, or smothering in the goddamn *heat* of this. Jared. Jensen. Jensen

I can't even think. Damn you. I adore you.

Thanks for feeding the fire, lady.

Date: 2006-02-27 07:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
*throws a log on the fire*

*g*

Glad you enjoyed!

Date: 2006-02-26 09:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cosmic.livejournal.com
*Damn*. That was-- just. *flails* (Is it bad that I want more of this?)

Date: 2006-02-27 07:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Glad you liked it! I'd like to write more, but I'm not sure how to go. In my heart, Jared/Jensen really is my OTP.

*ponders*

Date: 2006-02-26 12:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ice-crystal.livejournal.com
Eee! Oh wow, that was a hell of a ride. Mean!Tom so gets to cut the line of button-pushers and just... yes! A thousand times yes.

Date: 2006-02-27 07:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Yay! Glad you liked. I'm sure Tom is not half so difficult in real life, but it's really fun to write him this way. *g*

Date: 2006-02-26 01:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girlmostlikely.livejournal.com
Beautifully well-written as always, Lenore.

And I loved reading this pair and Tom all bitchy and against type.

*loves*

Date: 2006-02-27 07:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Yay! So glad you liked. I'm sure Tom is much more easy going in actual life, but writing him as darkly bitchy was good fun! *g*

Date: 2006-02-26 01:47 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] daughtershade.livejournal.com
Wow that was awesome. Poor Tom is just so jaded and tired. Nice! I like that Mike kind of knows what's going on but doesn't do shit about it. That seems very lazy and self centered which suits him well for this piece. I love over protective Jenny. And clueless baby Jared. I'd really love to see what Jared does with this now. Nice job.

Date: 2006-02-27 07:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I always see Mike as someone who likes to stir things up and enjoy the drama, not maliciously, but like it's just all for his amusement. I think I may have been getting more Dean than Jensen with this, but I just can't resist a protective dynamic between the two of them, whether J-squared or Sam/Dean.

Glad you liked!

Date: 2006-02-26 04:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] veradeath.livejournal.com
Woa. I like this jerk!Tom. He seems more real. And the angry!proxy!sex was hot.

Date: 2006-02-27 07:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Glad you liked! I'm sure Tom's not half so difficult in real life, but it is fun to write him this way. *g*

Date: 2006-02-26 06:06 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] tommybarbarella.livejournal.com
This is great! And I want more...are your fics arranged by category and how do I find that? I am technologically impaired, you see. I would like to read more crossover SV/SPN if you've got it. Thank you!!

Date: 2006-02-27 07:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Thanks! Glad you liked. I have to admit that my Memories section is kind of a wreck. When I started my LJ I was all SV all the time, so I made each individual story its own category. But then, as I branched out, I started just making a category for the fandom. I have one for WB RPS, but this is the only SV/SPN crossover I've written so far. All the rest are Jared/Jensen.

Check out [livejournal.com profile] winterlive and [livejournal.com profile] ethrosdemon. They have some great SV/SPN crossover RPS.

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Date: 2006-02-27 12:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] buhfly.livejournal.com
I think I might love you a little bit.

Date: 2006-02-27 07:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Awwwww! I think I might love you back. :)

Date: 2006-02-27 11:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tittakv.livejournal.com
A Jared/Tom story was missing from my OT4 list. Not anymore.

Dark Tommy was delicious, but what really got to me was Jensen being all protective of Jared. I can actually see Jared giving him hell about it later on. Except maybe not so much this time...

Date: 2006-02-27 07:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm sure Tom is quite pleasant and easy going in actual life, but it was so much fun to write him this way. And I may have been channeling Dean a little too much with overprotective Jensen. Jared would so rag him about something like that.

In this case, though, I like to imagine that Jensen kind of beats him to the punch and says something like, go ahead, call me your grandmother. And Jared just drinks his beer and doesn't mock him, and Jensen frowns and looks at him really hard. Skips trying to figure out how to get Jared to tell him what happened and goes straight to plotting how he can get back at Tom for whatever he did.

Date: 2006-02-27 06:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jfc013.livejournal.com
So many Toms, and I love them all! Nice work, my dear!

Date: 2006-02-27 07:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I like to think Tom has many, many layers that we will never know about, Janet! So glad you liked!

Date: 2006-02-27 10:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] winterlive.livejournal.com
HELLO TOMMY.

jesus.

Date: 2006-03-02 09:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Hee! That Tommy. What can you do with him?

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Date: 2006-03-01 12:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] babyofthegroup.livejournal.com
I know I'm about six weeks late in responding to this, but goddamn. You can write Tommy like that any day of the week and I will lap it up, baby. Oh yes.

Date: 2006-03-02 09:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm sure Tommy is nothing like this in real life, but it was so much fun to write! *g*

So glad you liked it!

Date: 2006-03-03 03:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] boxedturtle.livejournal.com
Tommy's so pissy mean and Jared's just a clueless puppy. I love it, the touch of overprotective Jensen was great. Your fics are always awesome. I friended you, hope you don't mind.

Date: 2006-03-03 07:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
People do compare Jared and Tom, and I have to imagine that Tom doesn't like it one little bit! *g*

Glad you liked this. And thanks for friending me!

Date: 2006-04-03 12:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] justabi.livejournal.com
Oh god, I love Tommy being mean in such a delicious way. *happy sigh*

Date: 2006-04-09 08:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Yay! Glad you liked this. I was kind of afraid it would put Tommy fans off. But it was just too much fun not to give him a bitchy side. *g*

Date: 2006-04-05 02:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] geneli4.livejournal.com
man, i have no idea how you do it, but i love that you do! and i love how underneath all that pretty there's just more, and it's real and hot and mmmm, this one hurts in all the best ways. thanks for sharing it!

Date: 2006-04-09 08:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
So glad you liked this! I wanted to give Tommy an inner life--even if it was kind of a bitchy one. *g*

Date: 2006-12-05 02:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rachel-martin64.livejournal.com
Well, I tried to post this before, LJ ate it, I'll try again.

I remembered your TS fic, how much I enjoyed it, and when I saw this story I decided to read it, although I don't read much RPS.

I really liked this. I liked the characterization for Tom. He comes across as tired and bitter and sad and disillusioned. The way he immediately assumes the baseball game is just a PR ploy. The way he assumes Jared and Jensen can't possibly be just friends. The way he resents Jared for being happy and optimistic, for not having had to resort to dirty tricks to get jobs. "The new Tom Welling," ouch.

Liked the characterization for Jared and Jensen, cheerful positive Jared and protective Jensen.

Hope you write a follow up story. I would suppose that Jensen figures out what Tom did and gets revenge.

Good story, thank you for writing.



Date: 2007-08-28 06:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Oh, dear. I somehow missed responding to this. And it's such lovely feedback! Very belatedly, I'm so glad you liked the story. And thank you so much for taking the time to comment.

Date: 2007-07-22 03:37 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] fenwic.livejournal.com
Oooh, I asked a friend where all the Bitch!Welling RPS was hiding and she pointed me here. I'd been looking for Tom/Mike, and had no idea what to expect from Tom/Jared... Well, I LOVE this. Love easygoing Jared and Mike, protective Jensen(!), and "always been a little bit of a son of a bitch" Tom :P Fabulous, thank you :)

Date: 2007-08-28 06:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked this! Tom really does seem to have an edge to him, and Jared appears honestly cheerful and optimistic. A collision between the two of them seemed somehow inevitable. At least...in my imagination! *g*

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