Lenore - this was great ! I'm at work and when I read that line - "With Clark.", I just about fell out of my chair and spit coffee on my screen !!! Writers don't surprise me often and this piece was a really great surprise. Well Done. *g* Vee
Hey, Vee. Thanks so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. I know it's not quite everybody's cup of tea. Thanks for going to the dark place with me. *g*
Whoa. This is so beautifully done, it makes me ache. Talk about gorgeous characterization and incredible dialogue. And just when I thought it was all going to head south, you pull a u-turn and surprise me. Wow. Just wow. Thanks so much for sharing it!
Hey, doll, thank you so much! I really appreciate it. I know this is a little bit of a stretch plotwise, but it's just such a theme on the show of Lionel messing with Lex's people. I just wondered what would happen if he ever turned his sights on Clark.
Wow. This wasn't a truly black out drapes kinda dark place just a hazy fogged over deep grey place. The decisions and realizations at the end brightened it considerably. MB better watch his back, and sides, and heck peripheral vision cause Lex would never let this drop. Great job!
Man, Lionel squicks me every time, but as long as it ends in happy Clex I don't mind too much. I liked the theme of how Lex has felt inside all his life and how that changes after Clark. And Clark's reasons for what he did - Wow, what a rescue. Great job.
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Date: 2003-01-27 08:57 am (UTC)"With Clark.", I just about fell out of my chair and spit coffee on my screen !!! Writers don't surprise me often and this piece was a really great surprise. Well Done. *g* Vee
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Date: 2003-01-27 10:11 am (UTC)Because it was all you!
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Date: 2003-01-27 12:47 pm (UTC)I so glad you enjoyed it!
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Date: 2007-10-20 01:17 am (UTC)I'm so glad you enjoyed the story!
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