HP Snippet: Extra Credit
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shaggirl and wrote her a little Snape/Draco snippet. It's probably the only HP snippet I'm ever going to write, so I'm posting it here for posterity. *g*
Oh, and...sorry,pun!
Note: Not Brit-proofed. Beware any falling Americanisms.
Extra Credit
by Lenore
Surely, the news of a failing mark in Potions would not be happily received at Malfoy Manor, but there was nothing Snape could do about it. His loyalty to his fellow Slytherins was strong--even if his feelings toward Lucius Malfoy were rather...complicated--but the fact remained that the boy simply had not mastered the course work, no matter how hard Snape had pushed him. Sadly, it appeared young Draco was the first Malfoy in an age with no particular wizarding talent.
The boy knew, of course, what was coming and lingered after class, no doubt to plead his case.
Snape did his best to squelch that hope. "Think carefully, Mr. Malfoy, before you compound failure with the indignity of whining about it."
"I thought perhaps I could...do some extra credit, sir?" Draco ventured hopefully. "To improve my grade."
Snape sighed heavily. He wanted to say no. Would have done to anyone else. He considered the notion of extra credit utter nonsense.
He sighed again. "I suppose, if you must. But I make no promises. If you fail to convince me of your competence, the mark still stands."
The boy's face brightened. "I understand, sir."
"Wait here."
Snape swept into the supply closet and perused the shelves, searching his mind for some potion that would not leave behind a hideous mess when it inevitably went awry. A rustling noise came from behind him, and he whirled around, only to find Malfoy malingering in the doorway.
"No students allowed in here," he reprimanded curtly. "You know the rule."
"Sorry, sir." Malfoy's apology was as unconvincing as his Persuasion Charm had been. "I just thought you might have dropped something."
Snape glared at him. "I most certainly have not--"
Malfoy persisted, "Let me help you look, sir."
He got down on his knees and fumbled around, making Snape all the more out of sorts, until somehow the boy ended up kneeling in front of him, making Snape strangely out of breath.
There was little, if anything, Malfoy could have said just then that would not have earned him a withering retort and immediate dismissal from the dungeon, and he was just wily enough to realize it. He went right to work instead, hands snaking beneath Snape's robes, undoing his trousers, pushing the fabric out of his way, bending his head.
Snape had to wonder what the boy had been up to. This was no beginner's blowjob; he licked and sucked like someone who knew his way around. If only he put this much industry into his studies, Snape thought sadly. Malfoy took his prick deeper into his throat, staring up at him with a smug glint in his eyes, so sure of himself, and Snape felt a petty resentment building along with his orgasm. Both were relieved when he pulled out and came in the boy's face. Malfoy blinked in indignant disbelief as spunk dripped from his chin, and Snape smiled, well satisfied with himself. After all, a passing mark shouldn't come too easily.
He tucked himself back into his trousers and arranged his robes. "Very well, Malfoy. I find your skill…adequate."
The boy had been wiping his face with the sleeve of his robe, and went still at that, glaring at Snape. Clearly he found being judged merely satisfactory quite an insult.
"Or do you wish me to reconsider that opinion?" Snape inquired imperiously.
Draco got to his feet and flounced out the storeroom, huffy despite his reprieve. Snape returned to his desk and took up his quill with considerably more cheer than usual. Perhaps there was something to this extra credit business, after all.
shaggirl and wrote her a little Snape/Draco snippet. It's probably the only HP snippet I'm ever going to write, so I'm posting it here for posterity. *g*Oh, and...sorry,
pun!Note: Not Brit-proofed. Beware any falling Americanisms.
Extra Credit
by Lenore
Surely, the news of a failing mark in Potions would not be happily received at Malfoy Manor, but there was nothing Snape could do about it. His loyalty to his fellow Slytherins was strong--even if his feelings toward Lucius Malfoy were rather...complicated--but the fact remained that the boy simply had not mastered the course work, no matter how hard Snape had pushed him. Sadly, it appeared young Draco was the first Malfoy in an age with no particular wizarding talent.
The boy knew, of course, what was coming and lingered after class, no doubt to plead his case.
Snape did his best to squelch that hope. "Think carefully, Mr. Malfoy, before you compound failure with the indignity of whining about it."
"I thought perhaps I could...do some extra credit, sir?" Draco ventured hopefully. "To improve my grade."
Snape sighed heavily. He wanted to say no. Would have done to anyone else. He considered the notion of extra credit utter nonsense.
He sighed again. "I suppose, if you must. But I make no promises. If you fail to convince me of your competence, the mark still stands."
The boy's face brightened. "I understand, sir."
"Wait here."
Snape swept into the supply closet and perused the shelves, searching his mind for some potion that would not leave behind a hideous mess when it inevitably went awry. A rustling noise came from behind him, and he whirled around, only to find Malfoy malingering in the doorway.
"No students allowed in here," he reprimanded curtly. "You know the rule."
"Sorry, sir." Malfoy's apology was as unconvincing as his Persuasion Charm had been. "I just thought you might have dropped something."
Snape glared at him. "I most certainly have not--"
Malfoy persisted, "Let me help you look, sir."
He got down on his knees and fumbled around, making Snape all the more out of sorts, until somehow the boy ended up kneeling in front of him, making Snape strangely out of breath.
There was little, if anything, Malfoy could have said just then that would not have earned him a withering retort and immediate dismissal from the dungeon, and he was just wily enough to realize it. He went right to work instead, hands snaking beneath Snape's robes, undoing his trousers, pushing the fabric out of his way, bending his head.
Snape had to wonder what the boy had been up to. This was no beginner's blowjob; he licked and sucked like someone who knew his way around. If only he put this much industry into his studies, Snape thought sadly. Malfoy took his prick deeper into his throat, staring up at him with a smug glint in his eyes, so sure of himself, and Snape felt a petty resentment building along with his orgasm. Both were relieved when he pulled out and came in the boy's face. Malfoy blinked in indignant disbelief as spunk dripped from his chin, and Snape smiled, well satisfied with himself. After all, a passing mark shouldn't come too easily.
He tucked himself back into his trousers and arranged his robes. "Very well, Malfoy. I find your skill…adequate."
The boy had been wiping his face with the sleeve of his robe, and went still at that, glaring at Snape. Clearly he found being judged merely satisfactory quite an insult.
"Or do you wish me to reconsider that opinion?" Snape inquired imperiously.
Draco got to his feet and flounced out the storeroom, huffy despite his reprieve. Snape returned to his desk and took up his quill with considerably more cheer than usual. Perhaps there was something to this extra credit business, after all.
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Date: 2005-02-22 01:44 am (UTC)Hee! This is why I'll be sticking with Smallville.
But I have really gotten to enjoy Snape while reading HP fan fic, and I did have fun trying to write him. Glad you thought it worked!
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