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Okay, this didn't come out entirely fluffy. Veronica is just too tough for that!

Day Nine: The Secret Language of Cookies, VM, mostly Gen, tiny whiff of Logan/Veronica, PG-13

ETA: OOPS! I totally forgot to warn for spoilers. They're in here, for the most recent episode, 3x09. I'm SO sorry if I spoiled anyone before. Mea culpa!



The Secret Language of Cookies
by Lenore


The holidays. Is there a more action-packed time of year? So much consumer debt to pile up, suicide methods to contemplate. All the hustle and bustle of eating enough to overtake the elephant as the world's largest land mammal and spending precious vacation days on once-a-year relatives who aren't once-a-month or once-a-week for good reason. In all this excitement, it's easy to lose sight of what the season truly offers us: the opportunity to catch up on 365 days of backlogged sentiment in a frosted vocabulary that everyone appreciates.


The first delivery was the easiest, red paper plate left next to the coffee maker. Her dad raised an eyebrow as he moved to the cabinet for a mug. "Is this about that pony again?"

"Please, Dad, please! Can I have him?" She grabbed onto his arm and bounced on her toes. "He can live in my room, and I'll feed him the straw pocketbooks I don't want anymore, and braid flowers into his mane. We can even call him Keith." She flashed a big, bright, hopeful smile.

He picked up a sugary reindeer by the antlers. "I don't know. Have you been good this year?"

Veronica deflated melodramatically. "Sex, drugs and rock and roll, why must you tempt me so?"

Her dad laughed and kissed her on the forehead. "Thanks for the cookies, honey. You plan on being home for supper tonight?"

Veronica helped herself to one of her dad's snowmen. "Unless Brad calls and says he's dumped Angelina."

"Tell him I'm picking up tacos from Manny's."

"I'm sure he won't want to miss it."

Some cookies had it easy, an uncomplicated "I love you" packed into every artery-hardening calorie.


Delivery number two was a three-for-one deal, Mac and Wallace paying an early morning, finals-are-almost-upon-us visit to the library.

"Are there," Wallace lifted the foil cover and peeked underneath, "snickerdoodles! Score!" He grinned.

"Can I trust you to actually give this to Piz?" She squinted suspiciously before handing over the other plate.

Wallace put on his most innocent expression.

"I have eyes everywhere," she reminded him.

"I hear normal girls worry about holiday cheer adding to their waistlines." Mac hugged her plate of cookies. "How happy am I not to be normal?"

"Enjoy, my friends," Veronica said with a grand sweep of her arm. "The salt mine of the stacks is calling my name, I'm afraid."

She left them discussing the relative merits of milk or coffee as the beverage of choice for a holiday sugar overload.

Some cookies conveyed what was just a little too hokey to put into words, "You'll always be my hero" and "I don't know what I'd do without you."


Veronica borrowed Mac's key to leave Parker's care package on the desk in her room, along with a note, because the provenance of edibles took on a whole new importance when you'd been through what Parker had. If Veronica had learned that lesson a little more thoroughly herself, she might have avoided at least some of her recent trouble.

Sometimes cookies were humble, "I don't know how to thank you, and I wish I could have returned the favor."


Weevil looked up from the thermostat he was repairing. "Veronica Mars. I was wondering when you'd be by. So, what am I guilty of now? Kicking puppies? Drowning kittens? Littering?"

He looked interested.

She held out the package. "Peace offering."

His wariness took only a moment to melt away. He reached for the cookies, truce accepted, and that was the thing about Weevil. He didn't hold a grudge, not about being falsely accused at least. Probably because there was so much he had actually been guilty of over the years.

"I didn't have anything to do with the dean's death, just so you know," he said as he munched away on a gingerbread man. "I liked the guy."

"I know," Veronica told him.

"You need any help looking into it, you let me know."

"So you can end up on the next bus back to Chino? Pass. Besides, what makes you think I'm not leaving the investigating in the hands of the intrepid Sheriff Lamb?"

Weevil laughed. "Like I said, Veronica, if you need any help."

Sometimes it was like making a toast, "Here's to being on the same side, until we're not again."


The cemetery was quiet, middle of the week empty, and Veronica fiddled with the snaps on her jacket. These places made her jumpy.

"So," she felt self-conscious talking to a slab of granite, "that 'most hated man on campus' thing was supposed to be joke."

The answering silence made her all the more anxious to get the hell out of there. She sat the foiled-wrapped plate on top of the headstone, an oddity among the neighboring flower arrangements and wreaths.

"Nobody gets away with murder on my watch," she said into the air.

Sometimes it was making a promise.


It took some convincing at the prison--specifically, a handful of pecan sandies--to get the guards to let her bring the goodies into the visitor's room. Mercer hadn't lost his smirk, but there were dark smudges beneath his eyes. Somebody hadn't been getting much sleep lately.

"Couldn't stay away, could you, Veronica?" His smarmy smile turned her stomach, even from the other side of the bulletproof glass.

"As irresistible as I find a drug-wielding coward of a rapist, Mercer, I've really just come to deliver a message." She unwrapped the cookies and took a big bite out of a pink-frosted Santa. "Life is good, and you won't be part of it for a long, long time." She got to her feet and flashed a bright smile. "Enjoy your institutional gray Christmas."

Sometimes it was just the most effective way to make your point, "It's good to see you finally getting what you deserve, and I can only hope it involves being passed from thug to thug like a human party favor."


The last delivery was the only one that made her nervous, standing outside the room at the Neptune Grand, heart pounding in the back of her throat.

Logan looked beyond surprised when he opened the door. "Veronica."

"I, uh--" She pushed the cookies at him. "It's just-- Cliff said you worked something out about the charges from vandalizing the police car."

Logan's mouth quirked into an ironic smile. "Restitution, and I'll be donning an attractive orange vest for some community service fun."

"That's-- good." She looked down at the floor. "Do you think--"

At the same time, he said, "Maybe we can--"

They paused awkwardly.

"Dinner?" he asked at last. "Sometime."

"Tonight my dad's making Manny's. But...tomorrow?"

He nodded. "That's sometime."

She let out a breath. "Okay. I should, uh--" She gestured toward the elevator. "So. Tomorrow then."

"Tomorrow."

She was halfway down the hall when he called after her, "Veronica?"

She turned.

"Thanks for the--" He held up the plate, his smile lopsided and sheepish.

She braved a smile in return. "Happy holidays, Logan."

Some cookies didn't really know what they were trying to say, but the fact that they were talking at all was reason to hope.

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Date: 2006-12-06 10:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Awwww! Yay! Glad you liked.

Date: 2006-12-02 03:34 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] oxoniensis.livejournal.com
Oh, Lenore! This is just so perfect. It's so Veronica to do this, and every message was just right, and I confess to a slight damp place in the corner of my eye reading this.

Date: 2006-12-06 10:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Awwww! I'm so glad you liked this. I couldn't quite find the fluff vibe with Veronica, so I thought: Cookies! :)

Date: 2006-12-02 03:47 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] in-interval.livejournal.com
Wow. This story captures just about everything I love about the show. Absolutely perfect tone and wonderful interactions all the way around.

Date: 2006-12-06 10:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Thank you for the lovely feedback! It's been forever since I wrote a VM story, and I'm so glad you thought this worked. :)

Date: 2006-12-02 04:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cosmic.livejournal.com
SO MUCH LOVE.

Date: 2006-12-06 10:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
*hugs* Thank you!!!!

Date: 2006-12-02 04:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] barely-bean.livejournal.com
Some cookies didn't really know what they were trying to say, but the fact that they were talking at all was reason to hope.

Oh hon, this is completely perfect. VM's not great with fluffy, but hopeful's good. Hopeful's damn good. Yay!

Date: 2006-12-06 10:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I still have hope for them! Well...sort of. At the very least, they should have cookies.

Date: 2006-12-02 04:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] daraq.livejournal.com
So lovely. I needed that after watching this week's ep. Thank you!

Date: 2006-12-06 10:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you liked it! The last ep was great, but...ouch.

Date: 2006-12-02 04:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] swanswan.livejournal.com
If I haven't said it before - and I'm a lamer, so I probably haven't - I am LOVING all your Advent fluff. I don't have a calendar, but who needs one, when I have all this stuff! I'm about 4 weeks behind on VMars, and you've inspired me to catch up, totally. Such lovely bits! The Veronica and Keith one is definitely my favourite - it's pitch perfect.

Date: 2006-12-07 09:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Yay! I'm glad I'm not the only one in the mood for fluff at the holidays. *g*

Veronica Mars has gotten good lately! I recommend those last four episodes, especially one just before hiatus. Compelling stuff!

Date: 2006-12-02 05:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] norwich36.livejournal.com
Wow, you did the voiceover and everything. This was really fabulous--*such* a good Veronica characterization, and probably a little more hopeful than anything on the show lately! I'm so glad you had her reconcile with Weevil, too.

Date: 2006-12-07 10:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you liked this! I wanted it sound real enough, but still be able to live out my Veronica fence-mending fantasies. :)

Date: 2006-12-02 06:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bibliokat.livejournal.com
I *LOVE* Veronica talking through cookies, it's so very Veronica!

And, *sniffles*, I miss the dean:( So thank you for that part.

Date: 2006-12-07 10:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I miss the dean, too! He was such an interesting character. He started off seeming like he was going to be kind of black-and-white, but he always had a way of surprising me.

I'm so glad you liked this story!

Date: 2006-12-03 02:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rayaluna.livejournal.com
Yay for VM holiday fic! Especially such good fic which makes me crave cookies.

Date: 2006-12-07 10:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I say: cookies for everyone! :)

Glad you liked the story, doll!

Date: 2006-12-03 04:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laneyseradias.livejournal.com
I loved this! The part that really got me was Weevil looking interested. Because of course he is! If there are interesting things going down, Weevil wants in!

Lovely story. The last line was pitch perfect.

Date: 2006-12-07 10:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
So glad you liked this! I wish we got more Weevil on the show, so I had a lot of fun including him in my story. I miss his mischief-y ways! *g*

Date: 2006-12-03 04:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] halfway2home.livejournal.com
This is beyond sweet; it warmed my heart. I love the last line. Simple and hopeful. The Parker and Mac/Wallace sections were great too.

Date: 2006-12-07 10:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you liked this! Thank you for the lovely feedback!

Date: 2006-12-03 05:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blush-maven.livejournal.com
aww LOVED it.
Thanks! Remind me to bake you something.

Date: 2006-12-07 10:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Hee! Glad you liked. And I eagerly wait for my baked goods. :)

Date: 2006-12-03 06:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] candlewaxdreams.livejournal.com
This was beautiful. It gave me hope. Cookies as metaphor worked perfectly.

Date: 2006-12-07 10:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you for the feedback!

Date: 2006-12-03 07:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] afrocurl.livejournal.com
This was just way too cute and pretty fluffy until the last two.

Of course, I'd like to imagine that dinner turned out really well, and that it brought LV back together, but I don't think that's going to happen.

Date: 2006-12-07 10:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Yeah, sadly, I don't think Veronica and Logan are going to get back together so easily, either.

Glad you liked the story!

Date: 2006-12-03 09:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] la623.livejournal.com
awwww...the last part gives me hope! lol...this was really good..I love that she visited Mercer and she was all cool about it..

Date: 2006-12-07 10:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you liked this! And I TOTALLY envision her going to taunt Mercer at some point. It just seems so...her. *g*

Date: 2006-12-03 02:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] love4ever666.livejournal.com
Great job, I loved te ole story but my favorite delivery was to Mercer. Great job.

Date: 2006-12-07 10:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you liked this! And I honestly do believe she would go taunt Mercer. It's just such a Veronica thing to do. *g*

Date: 2006-12-04 12:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] madame-d.livejournal.com
I absolutely adore your spot-on Veronica voice. It's so in character, so her, with the voice-overs and the humour and the spot-on relationship she has with each of the characters. ♥!

Date: 2006-12-07 10:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Yay! I'm so glad you liked this and thought it was in character. Veronica's voice is so particular, and it doesn't always come to me that naturally, but I felt on a roll writing this.

Date: 2006-12-04 01:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] epeters.livejournal.com
Wow, VM fic. How cool. As always, it's perfectly done.
I love this daily fic you're doing. Um...have you noticed that in 10 days there has only been 1 SV fic? Just mentioning that...no pressure. :)

Date: 2006-12-07 10:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you liked this! And I did another SV story especially for you. :) I have at least one more planned before it's all done.

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Date: 2006-12-04 08:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chichuri.livejournal.com
Very nice. And as much as I liked the visit to Logan, I loved the visits to Mercer and the Dean's grave even more. Your Veronica is spot on.

Date: 2006-12-07 10:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you liked this! You know, I really liked Veronica's relationship with the dean. I'm sad he's gone! :(

Date: 2006-12-04 02:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] flaming-muse.livejournal.com
*wiggles happily* I love it.

And this line?

Veronica deflated melodramatically. "Sex, drugs and rock and roll, why must you tempt me so?"

Rang in her voice as clear as a bell. Perfect.

Date: 2006-12-07 10:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you! I'm so glad you liked this. Veronica's voice doesn't always come to me that naturally, but I really felt on a roll with this.

Date: 2006-12-06 09:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 2hot4lilly-kane.livejournal.com
That was totally *Veronica* i swear reading this just made my day, and i need some good VM Fics especially the way it ended last week, and how we won't be able to watch it again till January.

Shame.

Thanks i loved this!

Date: 2006-12-07 10:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Thanks for the lovely feedback! I'm so glad you liked this. And I'm so totally with you that it's just TOO LONG to wait until January for more of our show!

Date: 2006-12-08 11:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chounette.livejournal.com
Awesome. I love the whole message-delivering cookies concept - I really see Veronica doing that since she obviously has some trouble saying the real things.

This is going in my memories. :)

Date: 2006-12-30 10:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you enjoyed this! Thanks so much for the lovely feedback!

Date: 2006-12-29 07:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] antistar-e.livejournal.com
Omg. This is now officially one of my favorite things ever. Beautiful work, all around!

Date: 2006-12-30 10:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you! This made my day. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story!

Date: 2007-01-26 12:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moustrich.livejournal.com
I loved this. I loved the different messages for each cookie. Great story.

Date: 2007-02-03 06:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you enjoyed this! I figure Veronica may be better at getting her message across in gestures than words. :)
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