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I defaulted on fangirl brunch today, because going out in the driving wind and cold rain makes me so unhappy. So I stayed home and wrote fan fiction instead of cleaning. Although I did finish my taxes this weekend. I claim credit for that at least!

Title: Pedagogy
Fandom: Heroes
Pairing: Nathan/Peter
Rating: PG-13
Length: 600 words
Note: This turned out 100 hundred words too many for the 100 Touches challenge going on over at [livejournal.com profile] flyingpetrellis (which you should totally check out), so I'm posting it here.

Summary: Peter is a true Petrelli.



Pedagogy
By Lenore

"Come on," Peter coaxes. "You're my big brother. Aren't you supposed to teach me stuff?"

Nathan makes a skeptical face. "Not this. Whatever happened to Marcie Wilkins? I thought she had a crush on you. Learn from her."

Peter ducks his head, hair falling into his face. "I tried. She laughed at me." He glances sideways at his brother. "Please?"

Nathan lets out a put-upon sigh, but he doesn't say no. "It's really not that complicated. You just need a little self-restraint. Don't grab her or use your tongue like a battering ram." He adds dryly, "Pretend you're not a horny sixteen year old."

Peter tugs at Nathan's sleeve. "Show me."

"You're a pain sometimes, you know that, Pete?" Still, he doesn't leave. "Pay attention." Nathan cups Peter's jaw, not gently, but the touch of his lips is in sharp contrast, chaste and warm, tender even. He murmurs, "Softly."

"Like this?" Peter fumbles his mouth against his brother's.

Nathan circles his thumb over Peter's cheek. "Yeah, and then slowly--"

Breath on his lips, and Peter curls his hand around Nathan's shoulder and closes his eyes. Nathan traces the inside of Peter's lip, and Peter darts out his tongue to meet him.

"Read the response, that's how you'll know when to--"

The words tickle, and Peter grabs tight to Nathan's jacket, and Nathan takes his own advice, reads the invitation, hand curving along the back of Peter's neck, pulling him into the next kiss, less pedagogy and more heat.

Nathan's body feels solid and warm and dizzyingly real beneath his clothes, and Peter presses against him. Just a little shift of their weight, and they'll tip over onto the bed. Just a little shift, and everything will be different.

Nathan's hands move restlessly over Peter, touching his face, sliding up his arms, fingers dipping beneath his shirt, skittering across his back.

Peter pushes more insistently into the touch and murmurs "Nathan" and clings fiercely. At the sound of his name, Nathan tenses, and then his hands abruptly change mood, palms flat against Peter's chest, elbows implacably locked. He snaps to his feet, wipes his mouth with the back of his hand, and Peter doesn't flinch, as a matter of pride, not because he doesn't feel the slap of the gesture.

"I've got to get back to the city," Nathan says, all business. "You should give Marcie a call. I don't think you're going to have to worry about her laughing anymore."

Peter shrugs and doesn't look up from the floor. "Yeah. I might do that."

"I'll see you next week." The door to Peter's room closes quietly after him.

Peter lets out his breath and flops back onto the bed and stares up at the ceiling. His blood feels too close to the surface, the sound of it in his ears making him unbearably restless. He grabs for the phone and says "hey" when Marcie answers.

He can almost hear her blinking. "I didn't think you were going to call."

"Yeah. Sorry. I, uh-- My parents aren't here. Want to come over?"

"I don't know, Peter."

"Please?"

"Well--"

Peter knows a thing or two about reading responses himself, and he lets his voice slide low, "I'll do that thing you like."

"I'll be there in ten minutes," Marcie says and quickly hangs up.

Peter checks his supply of condoms, strokes a hand over his hard cock. Marcie will suck him before she even has her bra off, and then he'll eat her out, and they'll fuck. The usual, and it will feel good.

It just won't be enough.

Date: 2007-04-15 09:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] marinwood.livejournal.com
What a sneaky Pete! *g*

Fabulous and hot, as usual.

Date: 2007-04-18 01:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
You know he's got to learn *something* from watching the other Petrellis operate. *g*

Glad you liked, doll!

Date: 2007-04-15 09:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kelly-girl.livejournal.com
There is nothing like a devious Peter. I love him like this and I love them hovering on the edge of temptation.

Date: 2007-04-18 01:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm not sure if Peter is really this devious in canon, but he certainly is manipulative. And it's fun to imagine him as a horny sixteen year old! :)

Date: 2007-04-18 02:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kelly-girl.livejournal.com
It is fun! That last paragraph about him and the girl about sizzled my brain.

I've been imagining another Milo character as a horny sixteen year old. His character Bo in 'Cursed' that comes out as gay to the main guy.

Date: 2007-04-15 09:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyvyola.livejournal.com
Manipulation runs in the Petrelli family; Peter comes by it honestly. *g*

I'm sure he'll get what he wants eventually.

Date: 2007-04-18 01:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
*nods* I also feel sure he'll get what he wants. There's a certain amount of stubborness in the Petrelli DNA, too! *g*

Date: 2007-04-15 09:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] devin-chain.livejournal.com
Hot. That Peter Petrelli. He's... yeah. *fans self*

Date: 2007-04-18 01:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I like to think of him working his manipulative mojo on his brother. :)

Date: 2007-04-15 10:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emmademarais.livejournal.com
Hehehe

I didn't understand the summary. Then I read the fic. Touché! LOL!

We may not see it much in canon, but yes Peter really is a Petrelli.

Well done!

Date: 2007-04-18 01:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Glad you liked! Sometimes I get caught up in thinking of Peter as this cute puppy, and then he'll do something, and I'll realize: Nah! He's a Petrelli. *g*

Date: 2007-04-15 10:15 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] poisontaster
I love Devious!Peter and I especially love him when he's yours. Yummy.

Date: 2007-04-18 01:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Awwww! *blows kisses* Glad you liked this, doll. I have the feeling that Nathan knew Peter was playing him and decided to play him right back. Oh, Petrellis! *g*

Date: 2007-04-15 11:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pikapika217.livejournal.com
poor Peter! but this was a great fic.

Date: 2007-04-18 01:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm sure Peter will get what he wants at some point! *g*

Glad you liked this!

Date: 2007-04-16 05:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jakrar.livejournal.com
Perfect summary for this story! And Nathan and Peter are so clearly brothers. Very hot -- and it leaves me craving a sequel....

Date: 2007-04-18 02:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked! I think the Petrelli motto goes: the family that manipulates together stays together. Or...something like that. *g*

Date: 2007-04-16 08:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dapixam-q.livejournal.com
Oh Peter... oh Patrellis. That was perfect.

Date: 2007-04-18 02:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I say "oh Petrellis" pretty much every episode I watch! So glad you liked this. :)

Date: 2007-04-16 09:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lostandalone22.livejournal.com
Lol, love manipulative Peter. That's great.

Date: 2007-04-18 02:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I totally think Peter has it in him! *g*

So glad you liked this!

Date: 2007-04-16 11:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mandysbitch.livejournal.com
Oh,yeah! It's just a kiss, but it's so hot. Love it.

Date: 2007-04-18 02:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you liked it! Those boys can really make anything hot. :)

Date: 2007-04-16 01:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] linaerys.livejournal.com
Kissing practice! That Peter.

And I figure here that Nathan is no dummy, he's just willing to let himself be taken in by this excuse . . .

Very hot.

Date: 2007-04-18 02:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Oh, definitely Nathan is wise to him. I mean, do we think there's anything about Peter that Nathan doesn't know? He just finds Peter's little gambit...convenient. *bg*

Date: 2007-04-16 05:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ivy-b.livejournal.com
Great manipulation by Peter, and I kinda like Nathan for stopping it, at least this time if Peter gets his way, lol.

Date: 2007-04-18 02:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Persistence is a Petrelli family trait too, so... *g*

Glad you liked this!

Date: 2007-04-16 08:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elyssadc.livejournal.com
Heeeeee! What a manipulative little bastard. Oh, Peter. He really IS a Petrelli. But then again, I doubt it's particularly difficut to manipulate Nathan into doing something he really wants to do. Mmmmm. How I adore those boys.

Date: 2007-04-18 02:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Yes, yes, I suspect Nathan was conveniently suspending some disbelief about the state of Peter's virginity in order to be manipulated. *g*

Glad you liked this!

Date: 2007-04-16 08:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com
I really thought the kiss was the hottest thing going on here, and then you threw in this line: Peter knows a thing or two about reading responses himself, and he lets his voice slide low, "I'll do that thing you like." and my brain was like 'Now what thing is this? How did he learn it? Will he do it for Nathan one day? Inquiring minds have to know! Well, not have to, but are rilly rilly curious.'

I always say a day with Lenore writing the Petrellis is a damn good day. ;)

Date: 2007-04-18 02:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Well, my theory is that Peter has become quite adept in the oral love deparment, and while his technique will need some adapting for Nathan, he is a very, very eager student as you can see from this. :)

Date: 2007-04-16 08:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mystery-sock.livejournal.com
Cute and hot and wee and wonderful.

Date: 2007-04-18 02:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Awww, yay. I'm so glad you liked it!

Date: 2007-04-17 01:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bedpotato.livejournal.com
LOL! I wonder if Nathan's just acting stupid or he's really falling into Peter's trap. :P *loves* I love it when authors give Peter a naughtier, more evil side. Very nice. ;)

Date: 2007-04-18 02:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I suspect Nathan decided to be conveniently obtuse. *g*

Glad you liked this!

Date: 2007-04-18 01:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] krisdia.livejournal.com
HA! Go Peter, make us proud :o)

Date: 2007-04-18 02:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
He's a Petrelli too, damn it! *g*

Date: 2007-04-19 12:04 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] miss-universe93.livejournal.com
Just a little shift of their weight, and they'll tip over onto the bed. Just a little shift, and everything will be different.

That's a really gorgeous line. Really well done!

Date: 2007-04-20 02:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you liked this! Thanks for the lovely feedback!

Date: 2007-10-15 11:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sor-bet.livejournal.com
Whoa. Wow. The kiss was hot and the ending was a shocker. Excellent little fic!

Date: 2007-10-19 11:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked this. For all Peter's big-eyed earnestness, he's definitely got his own streak of Petrelli manipulativeness.

Date: 2008-10-12 03:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sonadorita.livejournal.com
Wonderful fic! You totally surprised me with the ending *g*

I absolutely love your description of the kiss, especially this here:
The words tickle, and Peter grabs tight to Nathan's jacket, and Nathan takes his own advice, reads the invitation, hand curving along the back of Peter's neck, pulling him into the next kiss, less pedagogy and more heat.

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