Kink Poll: The first of several

[scribblinlenore]

So in my poll about polling, match the character to the kink won. I decided to do separate polls for my major shows, so I could include more characters. Because...well, it was entertaining me! *g*



[Poll #1079962]

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This was supposed to be porn, but I fail

[lavvyan.livejournal.com]

The dress is simple, scratchy, roughly woven hemp that hasn't even been dyed. It itches on his skin, pulls at the fine hairs on his arms, chest, ass; doesn't fit very well despite – because of – the lovely cut. John feels incredibly stupid in his boots so he kicks them off, and then his socks, and then he just stands there, looking at his bare toes, the dirty floor of the hut, the wooden walls. Naked despite the cloth covering his skin. The silence stretches, heavy and oppressive in the small room, and John can't take it any longer, has to look up.

Rodney's watching him. Staring at him, really, face flushed and awed, and something hard and tight in John's gut uncurls as his fists unclench.

He still feels far too open, but suddenly there a strange thread of exhilaration tied into the wariness, like his first time taking up a fighter jet; like the first time he spread his legs and allowed himself to be taken. He takes a breath and then another one, careful not to move as Rodney steps close and reaches out.

The first touch is barely there, fluttering across his shoulder, fingertips sliding over the fabric, leaving their mark on his skin like they were branding him. Still that silence, but now it's anticipation growing into pleasure, and when Rodney trails his fingers down and across John's chest, John leans in.

There's the slightest stutter in Rodney's touch, but then it grows firmer, more daring, palm exploring his chest through the dress, thumb scratching over a nipple that's already hardened into a tight nub; and there's a second hand slowly stroking up and down his flank, large and warm even through the rough hemp; and it's good, so good, but there's still that thread of tension, still that knot of fear, and John wants, he wants-

"Beautiful," Rodney breathes, and John surrenders with a sigh; closes his eyes, and just feels.

Re: This was supposed to be porn, but I fail

[kassrachel.livejournal.com]

Oh, man. Wow.

This is gorgeous.

I want more of this story.

Re: This was supposed to be porn, but I fail

[ladycat777.livejournal.com]

Um. There should be more of this. Lots more.

John really does lend himself to bizarre sexual situations, thank god :D

Re: This was supposed to be porn, but I fail

[lavvyan.livejournal.com]

He does! He lends himself to bizarre situations, period. :D

Say. *clears throat* Can I ask you to look the finished product over for me? If you have the time? You always write such hot stuff.

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[ladycat777.livejournal.com]

YES. Um, I am bad about turning things around in a timely manner without nudging, but YES. SEND.

Re: This was supposed to be porn, but I fail

[lavvyan.livejournal.com]

Hee, thank you! It's not entirely done yet, but I'm hoping to finish it tonight. I'll send it then. And nudge you. :)

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[isagel.livejournal.com]

I beg to differ. This really does feel like porn to me, and it's beautiful.

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[crownglass39.livejournal.com]

I can picture Rodney there all wide-eyed and John standing there shell shocked and not quite understanding what's going on...

Re: This was supposed to be porn, but I fail

[anatsuno.livejournal.com]

It's extremely erotic as is, though, and that's just right too. :D

Re: This was supposed to be porn, but I fail

[scribblinlenore.livejournal.com]

I echo what everyone else said! This is wonderfully erotic, and I'm glad to see you plan to continue it. Yay!

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[love-jackianto.livejournal.com]

Lovely I would love to see more of this.

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[gaffsie.livejournal.com]

I never used to consider crossdressing a kink of mine before this fandom, but there's something about John that makes the idea of him in a dress, or skirt, or women's underwear totally hot.

and John surrenders with a sigh; closes his eyes, and just feels. *happy sigh*

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[tonicollins.livejournal.com]

Hm, yes, I did mention I think I love you, right? *g* John is so malleable, isn't he?

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[xylohypha.livejournal.com]

Oh, gosh. I'd love to see more of this, but it's lovely just as it is, too.

Crossdressing doesn't usually do much for me, btw (though I've nothing against it), but this bit? Huminahumina!

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[sffan.livejournal.com]

Very lovely image. You did a great job describing John's insecurity.

Re: This was supposed to be porn, but I fail

[krysalys.livejournal.com]

Mmmm, but's it's the best kind of fail.
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Re: This was supposed to be porn, but I fail

[ariadne83]

Oh wow. Everytime I read a John!crossdressing fic I start out thinking no, no it will not work... But it SO fits. He's just such a closed-off bastard he really seems like the type to have a horribly kinky secret *grins*

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[ferret-kitty.livejournal.com]

You don't fail, not at all. I think that little snippet is hotter than the last five things of bona-fide porn I read. *fans self* Wow. And I don't even like this kink. Good job!

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[anyanka-eg.livejournal.com]

Weirdly the idea of John cross dressing (actually cross dressing in general) doesn't do it for me. Except when it does. This is one of the ones that does. Just...yum.

Re: This was supposed to be porn, but I fail

[raincitygirl.livejournal.com]

Guh.

Er, I mean, that was nice.