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For organizational purposes, I'm reposting this comment fic here.

Title: Glory Hole Diva
Fandom: SGA
Pairing: John/Rodney
Rating: NC-17
Summary: For John, one of the pleasures of shore leave is anonymity.

Note: For my impromptu Party Favor Kink Challenge.




"So, Matthews once again managed to screw up the calculations for the shield optimization." Rodney waved a drumstick emphatically. "Those SGC morons. I had to set him straight, naturally."

"I'm sure you broke his will to live," John said absently.

Rodney brightened. "You think?" He snapped his fingers at their waitress as she passed. "Can we get another basket of hot wings?"

John took a sip of his beer and did reconnaissance out of the corner of his eye. There was a table of college girls at nine o'clock, a family with teenagers arguing about curfew across from them. This was what John loved about this place. You'd think the only action was fried food and mugs of draft unless you knew where to look.

"Are you sure you don't want some of this cole slaw?" Rodney asked with his mouth full.

John shook his head. "I'm good. Going to hit the restroom." He stood up and paused for a moment, a signal to anyone in search of John's kind of action.

The bathroom smelled of disinfectant and piss, the familiarity of it strangely arousing. The itchy feeling he'd had ever since he stepped through the event horizon ratcheted up a notch. He'd waited way too long for this.

At the far end of the bathroom, around a corner, were two stalls set apart from the rest. John hesitated just a second before choosing the one on the left. Who was he kidding? He needed to be the one who got used tonight.

He went inside, slid the latch into place, and waited. The hole in the metal wall of the stall was still there, where it had always been, and soon enough John had company. A hard cock, wet at the tip, appeared, and John fell to his knees, closing his eyes. The heat and weight, taste of pre cum on his tongue, and John choked back a moan. There was no doing this on Atlantis, not the way he liked it anyway, no names, no questions, no one to face when it was done. Just cock, pure and simple.

John sucked eagerly, taking the cock into the back of his throat. He shoved a hand into his pants, jerking himself hard. He thought of Rodney sitting in the next room, licking hot sauce off his fingers, completely oblivious. From the other side of the wall came the harsh rasp of breathing, like Rodney after a long hike on one of their away missions, and just for a second, John let himself imagine. Rodney's cock. His mouth.

He came, fingers digging into the battered metal of the stall, and then the cock in his mouth jerked, and he was swallowing down bitter salt.

He wiped his mouth on the back of his hand, cleaned up with a wad of toilet paper and waited. The one who got sucked left first, according to glory hole etiquette, but apparently this guy hadn't gotten the memo. John took a breath and opened the latch and hoped the guy had the sense to stay put at least until he was gone.

He washed up at the sink, because Rodney was waiting and John couldn't go back out there smelling like sex. He made a grab for paper towels and was just about to bolt when the other stall door swung open.

And Rodney stepped out.

Rodney, who didn't look the least bit surprised to see John.

"You think I don't know you." It was more a statement of fact than an accusation. "But I do. I know you, John."

John froze there, all the momentum on Rodney's side. Rodney hooked a hand around John's neck, and John fell into him. Rodney opened his mouth, and John held on, hand fisted in Rodney's jacket, and kissed back, tentatively for maybe a second, and then just as desperately as if he hadn't come mere minutes ago.

"Come on." Rodney curled his hand against the small of John's back, propelling him forward.

John had the sudden image of Rodney's bed, in Rodney's apartment, the two of them, naked and flung across the sheets, night turning to morning turning to night again.

His feet stuck to the floor. "I can't--"

Rodney leaned in, his breath against John's cheek. "You can. Trust me. I know."

The clench in John's stomach didn't ease, but he leaned into Rodney anyway, letting Rodney unstick him. He trusted Rodney to be right about twelve million times a day. He supposed he could trust him on this.

Glory Hole Diva story

Date: 2007-12-02 04:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maxinemayer.livejournal.com
Yeah! "I'm sure you broke his will to live." Yeah, this one was hot and very in character. Thanks for sharing! Love, mxm

Re: Glory Hole Diva story

Date: 2007-12-03 02:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Glad you liked this! I really enjoy tormented!Sheppard way too much. *g*

Date: 2007-12-02 04:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tex.livejournal.com
I just reread this a few days ago. Poor John is so messed up but Rodney gets him and oh, boy, if that's not love, I don't know what it. The ending was just beautiful.

Date: 2007-12-03 02:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I really think that's why they're my favorite OTP of all, because they're both messed up in their own ways, but they have each other, and that's all they need. Oh, boys!

Date: 2007-12-02 04:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crownglass39.livejournal.com
This was even hotter reading it the second time around.

Date: 2007-12-03 02:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Yay! Thanks!

Date: 2007-12-02 05:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elsmoka.livejournal.com
Hot and beautiful! I love it! :)

Date: 2007-12-03 02:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm so glad! Thanks!

Date: 2007-12-02 05:50 pm (UTC)
tarlanx: Spiced latte style drink in a glass (Default)
From: [personal profile] tarlanx
Wonderful ficlet...and I'm so glad it was Rodney.

Date: 2007-12-03 02:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Rodney really does know him, no matter what John thinks!

Date: 2007-12-02 06:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] swanswan.livejournal.com
Wow, that made me clench all over. Including RUDE PLACES. And my HEART.

Date: 2007-12-03 02:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
That's exactly what I was hoping for! *g*

Date: 2007-12-02 06:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] psyko-kittie.livejournal.com
marvelous and so HOT

Date: 2007-12-03 02:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Yay! Thank you!

Date: 2007-12-02 06:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scoob2222.livejournal.com
hot and I have to agree very in character

Date: 2007-12-03 02:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you thought so! Thank you!

Date: 2007-12-02 06:42 pm (UTC)
goddess47: Emu! (Default)
From: [personal profile] goddess47
Rodney leaned in, his breath against John's cheek. "You can. Trust me. I know."

Hurrah for Rodney to take the initiative.....

Nicely hot and yet full of angst...

Date: 2007-12-03 02:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Sometimes John just needs some encouragement! I'm glad you liked this!

Date: 2007-12-02 07:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] almostnever.livejournal.com
Great last paragraph, makes such a good emotional chaser to the hotness!

Date: 2007-12-03 02:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you thought so! Thank you!

Glory Hole Diva

Date: 2007-12-02 07:17 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] velocitygrass.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you reposted this. I never read it in the comments because I can't take John with someone else. But it is John/Rodney after all and I loved it.

"You think I don't know you." It was more a statement of fact than an accusation. "But I do. I know you, John."
This is so perfect as is the follow-up of "You can. Trust me. I know." because he's just proven that he does know John.

Awesome!

Re: Glory Hole Diva

Date: 2007-12-03 02:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I know how you feel. I'm very OTP about John and Rodney! And I'm glad you liked this. One of the reasons they are my OTP is that they just get each other, you know?

Date: 2007-12-02 07:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] roxy-palace.livejournal.com
This is totally hot. Read it a while ago, but this time round (maybe post Miller's Crossing??!) it sizzles. John, you're such a freaking mess. *sigh*

Thanks for reposting and writing.
xx

Date: 2007-12-03 02:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
He IS such a mess! Poor John. I'm so glad you liked this!

Date: 2007-12-02 07:43 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] shalom
"You can. Trust me. I know."

Fan-freaking-tastic. I would so much like to read more of this.

Date: 2007-12-03 02:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you liked this! And I do think sometimes about what would happen next. I might still write more.

Date: 2007-12-02 07:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anyanka-eg.livejournal.com
Mmmmm, screwed-up!John...there's nothing better :-)

Date: 2007-12-03 02:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
He really is SO messed up. Glad you liked this!

This was hot, but what about....

Date: 2007-12-02 08:51 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] korilian.livejournal.com
The hole in the metal wall...

This is the second time I read this, so I could focus on the details this time, instead of the hot. Metal wall?!? That means someone put some serious work into preparing that stall... (and I wouldn't want to stick my dick... well actually I don't have a dick, but if I did, I wouldn't want to stick it through a hole like that. It sounds... sharp. And just what is the etiquette of glory holes anyway?!?

Hee! Of course John wants to be used. I bet his graduation class elected him most likely to die from an STD (and he joined the airforce out of spite).

Re: This was hot, but what about....

Date: 2007-12-03 02:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Hee! Poor Rodney and his penis, I wouldn't want to endanger them, I swear! In my head, the hole in the wall is neatly machined, the edges smooth, and there's no threat of injury. Although I can't promise anything about hygiene. As for the glory hole etiquette, well, I'm sure it's very strict. *g*

I bet his graduation class elected him most likely to die from an STD (and he joined the airforce out of spite).

I snorted water out my nose laughing at this. Oh, John!

Re: This was hot, but what about....

Date: 2007-12-03 09:49 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] korilian.livejournal.com
In my head, the hole in the wall is neatly machined, the edges smooth, and there's no threat of injury.

So did the owner of that nice family diner take the weekend off to prep that stall? That idea oddly appeals to me, because I can picture him spreading the word on the hardcore sex sites he (and John) like to frequent. I can't help it! I'm absolutely fascinated by the details!

Date: 2007-12-02 09:57 pm (UTC)

Date: 2007-12-03 02:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Glad you liked!

Date: 2007-12-03 07:44 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] mos-self.livejournal.com
Oooh, nice! What a lovely story-- short and sweet and hot and slightly angsty and, well, just right.

One of my favorite fantasies, too!

Um, fantasies regarding our favorite slashable pairs, that is. I would never *ever* think of doing such a thing myself.

Never.
Nope.

:::snickers:::

Date: 2007-12-12 04:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I would never *ever* think of doing such a thing myself.

No, no, of course not! *g*

I'm glad you liked this!

Date: 2008-03-17 02:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] linaerys.livejournal.com
Found this whilst searching for your SI cover drabble and I don't know how I missed it the first time around. I love slutty, tormented John. This is great.

Date: 2008-03-22 06:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I love slutty, tormented John.

Me too! I don't know why. It just seems like it's his destiny! *g*

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