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Title: There's A New Kid In Town
Fandom: SGA
Pairing: John/Rodney
Rating: PG-13
Summary: A new vampire is taking L.A. by storm, and he has an offer to make vampire hunter John Sheppard.
Notes: This is for [livejournal.com profile] thdancingferret. I hope it brings some cheer. Vaguely based on the Anita Blake books by Laurell K. Hamilton, or the first one anyway, since that's as far I've gotten right now. Thanks to the wonderful [livejournal.com profile] svmadelyn for the idea and the first line.



There's A New Kid In Town
By Lenore

John Sheppard didn't sleep with vampires; he killed them. It was important to be clear about these things, he'd found.

Of course, he also didn't have sit-downs with new vamps who came to town bent on killing their way to the top of the undead food chain. This didn't keep an invite from appearing in the afternoon's mail, on cream-colored stationery, with an old-fashioned wax seal, the handwriting decidedly self-important:

Mr. Sheppard,

No doubt you know who I am. At least you do if
you're not hopelessly idiotic. It would seem we have
certain goals in common, and since my time is much too
valuable to waste, I suggest we combine our efforts.
Come to this address tonight at nine. Bear in mind
that I have many more important things to do than wait
around for impertinent humans, so don't be late!

Rodney McKay



"What, no RSVP?" John said dryly.

He tossed the letter into the trash.


On Wednesday mornings, John met Ronon at the gun range for an hour of blowing away paper targets. Bullets didn't slow down vamps all that much, but in their line of work, it wasn't just the undead that had it out for them.

"Got a warrant to take out those bloodsuckers in Torrance," Ronon said, in between firing off rounds. "The ones that killed those kids." He snorted with disgust. "Took the judge long enough."

John nodded, fondly remembering the good old days when the only rule was: find a vampire, kill the vampire. Simple. Clear. But then five years ago, Congress in all its infinite wisdom signed the Human-Vampire Mutual Preservation Treaty, which outlawed killing vampires unless there was conclusive proof they'd killed a human being. Now if you wanted to put down a murderous bloodsucking monster, there were writs and red tape and court appearances to wade through before you could get on with it.

"McKay wants to meet with me," John told Ronon. "Sent me a formal invitation and everything."

Ronon raised an eyebrow. "Yeah?"

John nodded. "He thinks I'm stupid enough to walk into that trap."

"Maybe he was asking you out on a date." Ronon grinned.

John made a face. "Not very likely."

"Yeah, " Ronon deadpanned, "'cause you always see it coming."

"What's that supposed to mean?"

"Vamps have a thing for you, Shep. Must like the way you look kneeling at their feet or something." Ronon shrugged. "Or maybe it's the hair. You gonna go see what McKay wants?"

"Nope." John fired off one last shot, hitting the center of the target with dead on accuracy. "But I am going to be ready if he comes to see me."


Next stop of the day was a job in Bellaire. Elizabeth had called that morning to sweet talk him into taking it on without meeting with the client in the office first, something John had a very firm rule about, for very good reason. What you didn't know sometimes tried to kill you.

"He's in a real bind, John. He desperately needs our help, but he can't take time out from his schedule to come in for a consultation," Elizabeth had started in with the hard sell the moment John said hello. "He's a very busy and important man."

"Mmm-hmm. So exactly how much money are we talking about?"

Elizabeth never scrupled about taking a job if there was enough cash on the table. Why should she? It wasn't her ass on the line.

There was just the briefest pause. "As a matter of fact, the client is being very generous. Don't tell me you can't use the money, John. Besides-- I already promised we'd take it."

He sighed. "What is it?"

"A ghost. Just needs a simple cleansing."

"Fine," he said tersely. "But never again. I mean it, Elizabeth."

"Of course not," she promised, completely unbelievably. "The client's name is Alan Parsons. He's expecting you around noon."

Traffic wasn't too bad, or no worse than usual anyway. John turned up the radio, and the Mustang, a 1966 beauty he'd restored himself, purred along. When he'd left the Air Force seven years ago--or got kicked out if you wanted to be technical about it--he certainly never would have predicted he'd end up in the vampire killing business. Just one thing seemed to lead to another. He drifted out to L.A. to crash on an old Air Force buddy's couch, and the job he'd been promised tending bar fell through, and then he happened to see an ad looking for people with military or law enforcement experience. That was how he met Elizabeth. He'd been working for her as a supernatural bounty hunter ever since.

For once, there were no accidents clogging up the roads, and John made it to his appointment mostly on time. He knocked at the door but got no answer. He tried it, found it open and drew his gun.

"Mr. Parsons?" he called out as he edged inside.

The house was completely bare inside, no furnishings of any kind, and John's voice rang in the emptiness. He made his way through the place, step by careful step, checking each room. Nothing. He tucked his gun back into his waistband and pulled out his cell phone to report in to Elizabeth. It was still ringing when a hand clamped over his mouth, a rag soaked in something sweet smelling pressed against his nose. His knees buckled, and the phone fell from his hand.

Two men towered over him. They weren't even vampires.

"Hello?" he heard Elizabeth's voice coming out of the phone.

Son of a bitch was his last conscious thought.


He woke up with the distinct impression that he was drooling on himself. He swiped the back of his hand over his mouth and sure enough. Drool. Because what would injury be without indignity to go along with it? He forced his eyes open, not because he wanted to particularly. Whatever those jackasses drugged him with had given him one hell of a headache. But seeing what was trying to end you was usually a good first step to surviving it.

"Well, finally," someone said with an exasperated huff. "I told those morons to get you here without causing bodily injury, and what do they do? Use enough chloroform to knock out an elephant. Do you have any idea how long I've been waiting for you to wake up?"

John managed to push himself upright. He was on the sofa in a room that looked like something out of a museum. Paintings lined the walls. John was no art historian, but they appeared to be old, expensive and quite possibly by Leonard da Vinci.

A man sat opposite John, or not a man actually, but a vampire. John was pretty sure of it. Most vamps had a certain flamboyance about them. They tended to favor long hair and billowing sleeves and occasionally even a cape, as cheesy a cliché as that was. This one, though, was fairly unassuming in appearance. He had a stocky build and slightly receding hairline, and was wearing a hooded sweatshirt. What stood out most about him were his eyes, hot, bright blue, sharp with intelligence. That and his thighs, which were thick and strongly muscled, shown off to good advantage in the jeans he had on.

John blinked. He had no idea where that had come from. He must be a hell of a lot loopier than he realized.

The man scowled at John. "I'm a very busy person. I don't have time to waste while your brain ever so slowly shifts into…what? Second gear, is it?"

"That's what you get for drugging me and bringing me back to your lair," John said, the words slightly slurred.

The man rolled his eyes. "We could have done this the easy way if you'd just accepted my invitation. I'm Rodney McKay, by the way." McKay gave him a scrutinizing look. "Well, you are rather pretty as rumor would have it, and I understand the thing about the hair now. I did expect a little more in the brains department, though. Seriously, how could you fall for such an obvious ploy? It practically had a neon sign flashing 'Hey look, it's a trap.'"

"Sorry to be a disappointment." John rubbed his eyes, hoping it might help clear his head. "I'll try to be more deadly next time." He hefted himself up onto his feet and managed not to fall over as he walked around the room. "So, where'd you steal this stuff from?"

McKay got snippy. "I'd hardly have to steal my own work, now would I?"

John stared at him. "But aren't these-- I mean--" He was almost certain they were da Vincis. "I thought you were from Canada?"

"Most recently," McKay said irritably. "I've had quite a few lifetimes, in many places, using many names."

"I've never heard of a vampire doing that," John said dubiously.

"Yes, well," McKay's mouth twisted with sarcasm, "most vampires don't have a staggering intellect and vastly important contributions to make to the history of science and our understanding of the universe."

Uh-huh. So either McKay was certifiable or a five hundred year old genius. Neither option was anything John particularly felt like dealing with right now. Or, you know, ever.

"So. What brings you to LA.?" John asked with all the nonchalance he could muster.

"Cal Tech," McKay said impatiently, as if he couldn't believe John even had to ask. "You really need to start thinking straight, so we can talk business."

He rang a bell, and a moment later, a young blonde in a short skirt appeared.

"Yes, Dr. McKay?"

"Bring us some coffee, will you, Gretchen?"

Gretchen smiled as if she'd just won the lottery and scurried off to get it.

"Look, McKay," John cut right to the chase, "I don't give a damn about vampire politics, except when it affects humans. You've worked your way up to being the second most powerful vampire in town in just a few weeks. Hey, good for you. If you want to make a move on the master, it's your business."

And your funeral. But John kept that to himself.

McKay's expression turned smug. "I guess word has been a little slow getting out. As of last evening, I am the master vampire of Los Angeles."

It was impossible for John to keep the shock off his face. "But how did you--"

McKay snorted. "Living forever isn't any remedy for idiocy, you know. Darquiel wasn't that hard to outsmart."

John had once seen Darquiel take on ten vamps at once and leave nothing but a very nasty stain on the floor when he was done. John was beginning to reassess just how much trouble he was in here.

Gretchen returned carrying a tray with an elaborate silver coffee service and two cups. She set it down on the cocktail table.

"Is there anything else I can get you, Dr. McKay?" She cast him a shy, adoring look at him.

"That's it. Thanks, Gretchen." He gave her a distracted smile.

The girl blushed, and for a moment, John thought she might even giggle.

John raised an eyebrow at McKay when she'd gone.

McKay shrugged. "She has a crush on my grand unification theory." He poured the coffee. "Cream? Sugar?"

John shook his head, and McKay passed him his cup. McKay's hands were square and capable looking and rather elegant. John caught himself staring as McKay fixed his own coffee and not with the very reasonable fear of what those hands could do to him. Maybe he was the crazy one.

After adding a generous dose of cream and a heaping teaspoon of sugar to his cup, McKay took a sip and murmured, "Mmmm. Jamaican Blue Mountain. Now that's coffee." John's surprise must have been obvious, because McKay's mouth quirked into a smile. "Yes, yes, most vampires don't bother with food, but as we've already established, I'm not most vampires. Except, of course, that I do get my sustenance from the usual source, perfectly willing volunteers."

Like Gretchen, John suspected.

"So." John searched for the right words. "What the hell do you want?"

McKay appeared amused. "I want you to do what you do best. Kill vampires."

"Uh-huh," John said slowly.

"And I'm going to help you."

John put on the innocent expression he usually reserved for the police. "Of course, I only kill vampires when I have a valid warrant issued by a federal judge."

McKay waved his hand. "Yes, yes, I know how it's supposed to go. Vampires don't kill humans, and humans don't kill vampires unless they break that golden rule. So the treaty says. We both know how well that works out in the real world. By the time you have enough evidence to get a warrant, a rogue vampire has already left a trail of bodies."

"Why would you care?" John asked bluntly.

"This is my town now," McKay declared, lifting his chin. "It's where I do my very important work, and I won't risk having it interrupted by some ridiculous conflict between humans and vampires."

"Okay," John said, "now tell me the real reason."

McKay narrowed his eyes, and for one rather bumpy moment, John thought maybe he'd gone too far.

But then McKay began, "There was a grad student who worked with me at the university. Her name was Miko, and she was…not hopelessly useless as most people are. One day, she didn't come to work. They found her body a few weeks later, dumped in an abandoned lot in the Valley. Her throat had been torn out."

He looked almost-- sad, and John found himself faced with a unique notion, that maybe vampires actually had feelings.

McKay seemed to guess his thoughts, because he pushed his shoulders back and continued on more arrogantly, "Of course, if rogue vampires were only killing unspeakable morons, I'd have no reason to trouble myself. But there's too sad a deficiency of intellect in the world to chance the few people who aren't irretrievably worthless."

"I still don't get what you need from me. You're the master vampire. You make the rules, and you can punish any vampire who breaks them."

"Yes, that is one approach," McKay acknowledged. "But do you have any idea how much time that would eat up? Time when I could be revolutionizing modern physics. Not to mention that this would make me rather unpopular among my own kind. The last thing I need is to be constantly fighting off upstarts who have more ambition than brains. My way, I get you the information you need for your warrant. You take care of the problem legally. Everyone wins. What do you say?"

He watched John expectantly, those laser-sharp blue eyes trained on him, and when had anything about a vampire ever felt as heated as the expression in those eyes? I wonder if his skin is warm too. For one insane moment, John honestly considered finding out. Then he snapped back to his senses.

"Stop it," he said stonily.

McKay raised an eyebrow.

"You know what," John told him. "Using your--" He waved his hand. "Vampire mojo thing on me. I'm not susceptible. So don't waste your time."

"Oh, really." McKay gave him a speculative look.

The next thing John knew he was on his feet and pulled tightly up against McKay, their bodies plastered together at every point, shoulders and chests and thighs. McKay had a firm grip on John's jaw, holding John still while he thoroughly explored his mouth. John had no idea how long this had been going on, except that it had been long enough to make him hard.

I can have you anytime I want you. The voice was inside John's head, pounding in his blood and his bones. McKay had apparently been shielding him from his power before, but now he made John feel it, the ancient, throbbing force that would leave John a pile of ash if McKay ever unleashed it on him. He was beginning to think that maybe Rodney McKay had been Leonardo da Vinci in another life and not his first lifetime either. He was quite certain from the intensity of that power that McKay had been around much longer than five hundred years.

McKay let John go, and then he sounded just as normal and human as before, "But that's not how I like to do things. I'd prefer to have your cooperation."

By now, John was an unfortunate combination of aroused and terrified and pissed off. Nothing good ever came of that. Nothing, never, not once. He grabbed McKay by the collar and laid another kiss on him, all wet lips and bossy tongue, maybe not quite as searing as the kiss McKay had laid on him, but certainly not for lack of trying.

He pulled away panting and declared with near suicidal bravado, "I'm pretty sure you can be had, too."

McKay was hard, not that this would be all that much comfort to John if McKay decided to splatter him all over the walls.

"Well," McKay said at last. "It appears your reputation for reckless hasn't been exaggerated."

John took a breath and then another, feeling slightly dizzy.

"So, are you going to work with me or not?" McKay asked.

It would be absolutely insane to agree. The last few moments had proven that.

"Okay," John found himself saying nonetheless.

The really crazy part was that apparently McKay didn't even have to use the mojo to mess him up. John had been just as turned on by their second kiss as their first. Maybe his commanding officers had been right all along. Maybe he didn't have the sense God gave him.

McKay's blue eyes fastened on him intently. "Good. Let's get started then."

They sat back down and had more coffee, and McKay started offering up details of rogue vampire activity. John half listened as he mentally revised his personal mission statement.

John Sheppard didn't sleep with vampires. Even if he did occasionally, sort of, kind of, maybe, really want to.

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Date: 2008-03-09 10:52 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] shalom
"She has a crush on my grand unification theory."

That line alone was enough to tell you how much I'm enjoying this (let alone the rest of the premise and your fun characters).

Date: 2008-03-10 12:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I will always feel that Rodney deserves groupies for his big brain! *g*

So glad you enjoyed the story.

Date: 2008-03-09 11:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] freak-in-corner.livejournal.com
hey, never read the Anita Blake books but i'm glad i read this fic, loved it, especially vampire!rodney. Brillent.

Date: 2008-03-10 12:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you enjoyed it even if you haven't read the books! Thanks so much for commenting!

Date: 2008-03-09 11:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snarkist.livejournal.com
I love the idea of Rodney as a Master Vampire! Working together with John the Bounty Hunter to kill upstart vampires! And maybe, possibly, sexing it up every once in a while!

AWESOME.

Date: 2008-03-10 12:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
And maybe, possibly, sexing it up every once in a while!

Oh, definitely! In fact, I plan on writing more, so I can get to that part of the story. *g*

So glad you liked this!

Date: 2008-03-09 11:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] burntcopper.livejournal.com
:sigh: I don;t want sequels. I want the entire universe for this. is that too much to ask?

Rodney and John are really just icing on the cake, because you could fit the entirety of SGA in here in some form or another - Elizabeth as runner of a bounty hunting agency really, really is utterly awesome, and Ronon as a fellow hunter - hee! Oh, all right, special mention for Rodney being Da Vinci and older than that - I now have this image of Pythagoras going 'yes, yes, important things to do here, move along'. Probably not Newton, though. And seething in jealousy over Einstein. 'Yes, he may have got his paper in first, but I laid all the groundwork!'

Date: 2008-03-10 12:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I now have this image of Pythagoras going 'yes, yes, important things to do here, move along'.

And seething in jealousy over Einstein. 'Yes, he may have got his paper in first, but I laid all the groundwork!'

Oh my God, yes! Perfect. *loves*

I do imagine that I'll be playing in this universe for a while. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story!

Date: 2008-03-09 11:58 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] steammmpunk.livejournal.com
a;lksjdnfkljg;lktj EEEEEEE I love this so, so much.*ADORES* ♥

Date: 2008-03-10 12:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Awww, yay! I'm so glad you liked it, doll. I had much fun vamping out Rodney. :)

Date: 2008-03-10 12:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melagan.livejournal.com
Pure Genius!

Date: 2008-03-10 12:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Awww! *blushes* I'm so pleased you thought so!

Fabulous!

Date: 2008-03-10 12:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yinkawills.livejournal.com
I liked the first few Anita Blake books, but went off them as LKH's writing became more and more like not very good porn. Now if she'd been writing as well as this :D:D

Anyhoo,
Please, PLEASE can we have more of this universe? Vamp hunter John in action would be good. Rodney is so in character.Snotty genius, cant be bothered with all the posing...and its great to see him portrayed as innately sexy.
Would love to see the scene where they actually get together - specially if its after John gets to rescue him and get into protective, alpha male mode.

Re: Fabulous!

Date: 2008-03-11 03:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Yay! I'm so glad you liked this. I've only read the first Anita Blake book, but I have been told the train kind of goes off the rail with this universe at a certain point.

I had a lot of fun vamping up Rodney and John, and I definitely plan to write more. At least through the part where they have sex, because that seems only right. *g*

Date: 2008-03-10 01:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sarkastic.livejournal.com
This is such an awesome idea. I loved it. =D

Date: 2008-03-11 03:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I did have much fun vamping out Rodney and John. :)

Amazing

Date: 2008-03-10 01:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tbsvillageidiot.livejournal.com
I am a huge Anita Blake fan (Yes, I have taken days of her book releases off from work to read the latest releases). That being said, I love you took this universe and made John and Rodney a perfect fit. I look forward to more of this.

Re: Amazing

Date: 2008-03-11 03:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed this. As I said in my notes, I've only read the first book, so it's great to know that the story worked for someone who knows that universe so well.

Date: 2008-03-10 03:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] helenkacan.livejournal.com
Forget LKL; you're so much better.

I just adore the idea of Rodney being a master vampire and it's not so outrageous to consider that someone with a staggering intellect deserves to live longer than one lifetime.

So, go ahead, make him almost 3 millennia old. He could have started out as Pythagoras, swung through Euclid before going through a number of others including DaVinci. And he ended up Canadian. Yaaaaay! ::waves little flag::

I also love the idea that, of course, he has a number of willing volunteers to feed him. Perhaps you could introduce some of them to us, too.

It's been too long since anybody's work has excited me this much. But your version/vision is too enticing for me not to beg (hey, I'm not the first one).

More, please????? And, hot sex, too!
Very appreciative hugs,
H.

Date: 2008-03-11 03:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Awww, thank you for the lovely feedback! I'm thrilled you liked the story.

So, go ahead, make him almost 3 millennia old. He could have started out as Pythagoras, swung through Euclid before going through a number of others including DaVinci.

You know, I think I will! Originally, I was planning on having his first life be as a Roman engineer who designed the aquaduct or the Colosseum or maybe the Pantheon, one of the many amazing feats of Roman engineering. But how can I pass up Pythagoras and Euclid? I could still work some engineering/architecture in there somewhere. Hagia Sophia was actually designed by mathematicians. Maybe I'll give him credit for that.

I definitely have to write the story at least as far as their having sex, because it just wouldn't be right to do otherwise! *g*

Date: 2008-03-10 04:12 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] beeej.livejournal.com
OMG! This is fantastic! Are you writing more? Please? I'll bake you cookies! Image

Date: 2008-03-11 03:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you liked it! And yes, I do plan to write more. I have to at least get to the sex part of the story!

(I like chocolate chip cookies, by the way. *bg*)

Date: 2008-03-10 04:56 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] kymbr.livejournal.com
OMG!!! This was fabulous!!! I think I have found a new uni favorite!! I can't wait to read more :D

Date: 2008-03-11 03:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you liked it! I had much fun vamping up John and Rodney. There will definitely be more of the story.

Date: 2008-03-10 06:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lishel_fracrium.livejournal.com
Dear God! tell me there's more. please?

Date: 2008-03-11 03:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Well, there's not more yet, but there will be. So glad you liked it!

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Date: 2008-03-10 09:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] neek-love.livejournal.com
ZOMGYAY VAMP!FIC!

*squee*
This is great so far, as if John/Rodney snogging isn't hot enough, one of them's a vampire! Can't wait for more ^_^

Date: 2008-03-11 03:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you had fun with it! Making Rodney a vampire really was quite amusing to write. *g*

Date: 2008-03-10 10:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] miso-no-tsuki.livejournal.com
Abso. Bloody. Lutely. Awesome.
It all makes such perfect sense, really. A wonderful piece of writing to go with my coffee. *happy sighs*
More please?

Date: 2008-03-11 03:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Aww, yay! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. And I do plan on writing more of their adventures. I mean, they do really need to have sex. *g*

Date: 2008-03-10 10:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gardenprophet.livejournal.com
Oh, this was love. ::offers cookie::

Rodney trying to hold up his 'big bad vampire' rep and convince John it's just an 'inconvenience', and not that his *likes* humans. awwww.... ::wonders if he'd bite her hand off if she tried to pet mastervamp!Rodney::

I'm so happy at the thought there might be more.

Date: 2008-03-11 03:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Hee! We all know Rodney's a big softy at heart. Not that I'd push my luck trying to pet him, mind you. *g*

I'm so glad you enjoyed this!

Date: 2008-03-10 12:09 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] feather_qwill
*whimpers* Why do you have to rock so hard?

Date: 2008-03-11 03:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you liked this! I had much fun vamping up Rodney and John. *g*

Date: 2008-03-10 01:15 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] shimmoril
Oh. My. God. This is too perfect. You've managed to sketch out the Anita Blake world around our two boys, just as we know them from SGA. More please!

Date: 2008-03-11 03:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you had fun with it! And I do plan on writing more of their adventures. :)

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Date: 2008-03-10 02:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_sababa1/
My imagination is so fired up I cannot stay still. I'm imagining Rodney falling hard for John as John becomes a sort of liaison between the master vampire and the human law enforcement and just shoots up in rank and social standing in vampire/human society!!! And the politics.!!!!

I'm also wondering how the SGC and Atlantis can affect this universe? And does John's ATA make him more attractive to vampires or does his ATA makes him more susceptible to them? And are the Ancients responsible for vampirism?

Sorry for all the questions, but I wanted you to know, even if you never continue this universe, that I'll be thinking about it. I've never read Anita Blake, so this is very fresh and new to me. And awesome.

Date: 2008-03-11 03:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm thrilled that my story has stirred up your imagination. That's the best compliment ever!

I'm also wondering how the SGC and Atlantis can affect this universe? And does John's ATA make him more attractive to vampires or does his ATA makes him more susceptible to them? And are the Ancients responsible for vampirism?

These are questions I'm definitely wrestling with. In general, I'm not a big fan of mixing supernatural and sci-fi worlds, but I do like the possibilities in John being special in some way, as he is because of his ATA gene. I may give him some special abilities more like Anita Blake's, rather than brining in the Ancients. But I haven't really decided yet.

Thanks for the lovely feedback!

Date: 2008-03-10 04:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mindyfromohio.livejournal.com
Oh, dammit, now I have to go and read the source fic, too. Cause this was just awesome.

Date: 2008-03-11 03:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I've only read the first book, but I did really enjoy it. The series is kind of daunting, because there are so many books, and at a certain point, I've been told it really goes off the rails. I do plan to read more. At least until I get to the sex! *g*

I'm glad you enjoyed the story, doll!

Date: 2008-03-10 07:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gaffsie.livejournal.com
"Vamps have a thing for you, Shep. Must like the way you look kneeling at their feet or something." ♥ :D

I don't even like vampire-fics, but here I am, practically salivating at the prospect of more of this AU. Rodney makes an amazing vampire, and vampire hunter John is just too hot for words.

Date: 2008-03-11 03:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
John and Rodney make very sort of story better, I really think that's true! :)

So glad you enjoyed this!

Date: 2008-03-10 07:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] catmoran.livejournal.com
I had no idea I'd been waiting all my life for this story. And Rodney as da Vinci is brilliant.

Date: 2008-03-11 03:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Awwww! That pleases me very much. I am hoping to continue on with this. I want to go into more about Rodney's past and get John into some trouble and of course get them into bed together. :)

Date: 2008-03-10 10:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sorcha-gaia.livejournal.com
Oh, this is a great beginning! I was a huge fan of the Anita books until she became all about sex and no plot (nice sex, mind you, but ultimately pointless). I think you could take this a LOT of places! Just don't forget plot! ;)

Date: 2008-03-11 03:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Glad you enjoyed this! I've only read the first Anita Blake book as I mentioned in my notes, and the thing I really liked and admired about it is that it's just packed with action. I do plan on continuing my story, and I definitely want John and Rodney to get into lots of intrigue and adventures.

Date: 2008-03-10 10:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] almostnever.livejournal.com
Hee! Fabulous! This looks like the beginning of a wonderful friendship...

Date: 2008-03-11 03:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
This looks like the beginning of a wonderful friendship...

*nods* With a lot of sex thrown in as well, I suspect, no matter what John tries to tell himself. *g*

Date: 2008-03-10 11:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crownglass39.livejournal.com
I love it!!

More please?

Date: 2008-03-11 03:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you had fun with! And yes, yes, I do believe there will be more. *g*
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