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That crafty [livejournal.com profile] pun! She hypnotized me into writing smut for her. *g*

Too long to put in the comments, so I'm posting it here.



Kal-El has often wondered what crazed Kryptonian parents first had the idea of bringing their child to Cathor for their seventeenth birthday, to celebrate the age of ascension with Molvaran wine and a trip to one of the planet's many brothels. But then, his people's attitude toward sex has always struck him as strangely contradictory. On Krypton, married people never touch in public, an absolute taboo, and yet there is an almost abhorrence of virginity. "A negative state," his father calls it. Something to be remedied at the first appropriate opportunity.

And now it is Kal's turn.

"Here, son." His father leads the way into a place called "The Elusive Jewel."

Inside, the room is dark, music so loud it throbs in the air. It takes a moment for Kal's eyes to adjust, and then he feels a desperate heat flare in his cheeks. There are naked people here. So many naked people.

His father gives him a rare smile. "Take your time, look around. You can have anything you want, my son."

Kal swallows hard, and his eyes fasten on the floor. He can't help himself.

"You're an adult now, Kal-El," his father tells him sternly. "You really must start acting like one."

He turns curtly on his heel, off to the bar for a drink, leaving Kal to founder on his own among the nakedness. He lets out a sigh and does his best to look in some direction where he won't be staring right at a bare breast or a flushed cock.

Still, he supposes it is an improvement over the ancient rituals. They learned in school that parents long ago were on hand to witness their child's defloration, to offer advice, make sure innocence was thoroughly disposed of. Kal-El feels certain that if he had his father issuing commands at him, criticizing his technique as he tried to make love for the first time, he'd probably end up a virgin for life.

He soon begins to fear that this will be his fate anyway, even without his father's interference. So many choices, so many species, and he feels nothing but embarrasment.

Until he catches sight of the bare-headed alien. The man is half hard, leaning against a pillar, an almost defiant laziness to his pose. A Gniizulk leans over him, its fur turned deep indigo with arousal, one yellowed talon circling the alien's soft, pink nipple. The alien watches the play of its claw, smiling faintly, and casually pumps his cock, making the Gniizulk's fur shiver.

Kal knows he shouldn't stare--Kryptonians don't do such things--but this picture is just so...wrong, the imminently touchable alien and the claw-handed Gniizulk. The alien catches his eye, an insolence lurking beneath the smolder of his gaze. Kal feels paralyzed by it, and now he can't look away. The alien tilts his head, as if considering, and then slips out of the Gniizulk's grasp. When it howls its protest and grabs at him, the alien nods his head in Kal's direction. Kryptonians get preferential treatment on Cathor, everyone knows that, and the creature makes an ugly noise as it lumbers off in defeat.

The alien approaches, and Kal feels his throat tighten, his mouth go dry, all that smooth, bare skin coming his way. Only then does he see the mark, the familiar insignia on the man's hip, given to all slaves taken in Cathor's military conquests. This alien once had a different life, as something other than a whore, Kal feels sure of it. The way he moves, though. Clearly he's learned his new profession well.

"Another Kryptonian boy," the alien says as he joins Kal, smiling softly.

Kal feels the rush of heat to his cheeks again, but it's different this time, tinged with awareness. He can imagine how Kryptonians must appear to the people here, like flesh-grubbing hypocrites with their careless wealth and their sanctimony. He stares miserably down at the floor, so pained by the thought that it's hard to breathe.

The alien mistakes the cause of his distress and lifts Kal's chin gently with his fingers. His gray eyes are flecked in places with blue, and the expression in them is playful. "Don't worry. I'll take good care of you."

Kal feels the words all over his body. He doesn't even realize what he's doing until his hand is on the alien's naked hip, his thumb stroking in circles. His body is suddenly much too hot, in places that embarrass him, and the desire to lean in, press his lips to the soft skin of the alien's throat is simply too much to resist. When he pulls away, rather clumsily, he's shaking all over.

"Come with me." The alien holds out his hand.

And Kal doesn't hesitate this time. He takes it.

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Date: 2005-09-28 10:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jeannie81.livejournal.com
Oooh, this is so good. Lex is so sexy here. I know it supposed to be just smut, but I'd love to see more of this, I think Pun would too ;).

Date: 2005-10-12 03:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I know it supposed to be just smut, but I'd love to see more of this, I think Pun would too ;).

Hee! Well, I wouldn't want to disappoint you or Punny. And I do have more of this story in mind. I will definitely work on it when I get a chance. So glad you liked it!

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Date: 2005-09-28 11:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] latxcvi.livejournal.com
:::purr:::

So sexy.

and, um, it should not just end *there*. ;-)

Date: 2005-10-12 03:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Glad you liked the story! And, yes, there is more to the story. Writing it is on my list of things to do. *g*

Date: 2005-10-12 03:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Glad you enjoyed the smut! *g*

Date: 2005-09-28 11:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] teot.livejournal.com
And so it begins...

Mmmm, that was hot. Even without sex!

The drabble *was* sex. ;-)

Date: 2005-10-12 03:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Hee! Glad you enjoyed it, doll. I do have to write more. It was mean of me to leave horny, virgin Kal-El in the lurch like that.

Date: 2005-09-28 11:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] feliz581.livejournal.com
Gah! Fantastic smut! And I agree with everyone else: "Is that where it ends?!"

Date: 2005-10-12 03:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
*laughs* I do feel bad leaving poor, virginal Kal-El in the lurch like that. And I do want to try to make it up to him when I get the chance. Glad you enjoyed this!

Date: 2005-09-28 11:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] catmoran.livejournal.com
Shy, guilty Kal is cute. Sexy ho Lex is hot. But... conquered Lex makes me sad.

btw, it reminds me... any eta on that? (http://www.livejournal.com/users/scribblinlenore/205146.html)

Date: 2005-10-12 03:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Glad you enjoyed this!

And your story is coming along. About halfway done. I'm sorry it's taken me so long. I got stuck at a certain place, but I think I finally have it figured out. My goal is to get it to you by the end of October. Thanks for being so patient!

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Date: 2005-09-28 11:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stopawhile.livejournal.com
HEY! Where's the rest of this?

Excellent, hon. Thanks.

Date: 2005-10-12 03:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Hee! I feel sure that's what Kal-El is saying to himself: She's just going to stop there?

Glad you enjoyed this, doll!

Date: 2005-09-28 11:44 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] goddessleila.livejournal.com
Um. Wow. I think I'm hypnotized. The two of them still the same- Lex predatory and sexual and oddly affectionate, and Clark virginal and blushing and ashamed of who he is. Loved Clark worry about how hypocritical he seems, and how he thinks of Lex as "the alien" and the way Clark places himself in Lex's hands. You definitely need to write more of this.

Date: 2005-10-12 03:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Glad you liked this! I have written virginal Clark/Kal so many times you'd think I'd get tired of it. But no! It's always like the first time. *bg*

I do plan to write more of this when I get a chance.

Date: 2005-09-29 12:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] roxymissrose.livejournal.com
It would be wonderful to have more of this. There's so little sf in SV, I get all giddy when I read some--and of course, the whoo-hoo factor makes me happy too!

Date: 2005-10-12 03:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Glad you liked this! It's a little piece of a much larger story I have in my head that I do want to write when I get the chance. I love imagining life on Krypton.

Date: 2005-09-29 12:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] picara.livejournal.com
Omg, yay! The was *hot* and there wasn't even any *sex* in it. I love Lex all sensual and predatory. Thank you. :)

Date: 2005-10-12 03:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
So glad you enjoyed this! I had much fun writing the smut. *g*

Date: 2005-09-29 12:21 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] capnzebbie.livejournal.com
Mmmmm. I like this. It does have a "tbc" in there somewhere, right?

Date: 2005-10-12 03:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Hee! Yes, yes, I do plan to write more. I have a complete story arc in my head. Glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 2005-09-29 12:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fleegull.livejournal.com
Sexxxxy! Lex does make the best whore in the whole universe!

Date: 2005-10-12 03:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Mmm. He does, Fleegull! He really does. Lex just *is* sex. It's so satisfying to make him a man-whore in fiction. *g*

Date: 2005-09-29 12:59 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] entrenous88.livejournal.com
Wow, that's hot!

*vainly tries to follow Kal and the alien*

Date: 2005-10-12 03:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Hee! If I get the time, I do want to write more, so we can all go behind that closed door.

Date: 2005-09-29 01:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lapetite-kiki.livejournal.com
Oh! What a great start! ;-)

Date: 2005-10-12 03:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Glad you enjoyed it! When I get time, I do hope to write more.

Date: 2005-09-29 01:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rumpuso.livejournal.com
This is so unusual and at the same time so damn hot and enticing. Virginal Clark and slutty Lex meeting in an alien bar. You are so damn creative. I love this!

Date: 2005-10-12 03:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Glad you enjoyed it! I have to admit that virginal Clark is one of my favorite things in the world. *g*

Date: 2005-09-29 02:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shattered.livejournal.com
Yum. Overlord Clark and sex teacher Lex.

That last line is wonderful. Those three words, the moment I read it, it conjured up that image of Clark from "Cool" where he accepts Lex's ticket bet. I love the way it draws you in and reminds you of the show.

Date: 2005-10-12 03:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
So glad you enjoyed it! I do have a thing for virgin!Clark and predatory!Lex. No matter how many times I write about them I never get tired of them. :)

Date: 2005-09-29 02:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pun.livejournal.com
Oh, GUH!! I love you, Lenore. I really do. You know how much I love sex slave fic! That was HOT!

Date: 2005-09-29 02:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pun.livejournal.com
And, it was for meeee! Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU!

(tomorrow I will post "when you see this on your flist, write pun more "Call Me Al")

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Date: 2005-09-29 02:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tobyfan.livejournal.com
ooh. squee! This is yummy. Lex is so deliciously devilish.

Date: 2005-10-12 03:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
He may be a conquered man-whore but he still knows how to work a room! *g*

Glad you enjoyed it, doll.

Date: 2005-09-29 03:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] giddyfangirl.livejournal.com
Mmmmmm, Kal. *swoon in an undignified fashion*

Date: 2005-10-12 03:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
It's hard to be dignified, I find, when Kal is so blushing and eager. *g*

Glad you enjoyed this, doll!

Date: 2005-09-29 03:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anitac588.livejournal.com
Good morning to me Lenore!
Damn that was hot (and funny, poor Kal, stressing about his virginity) and I agree with couple that said - it really should not end there!
You're such a friend. Thank you so much for making me grinning wildly so early on.

Date: 2005-10-12 03:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm glad I could provide some wake-up porn for you, Anita! *g*

And I hope to write more of this. It's just wrong of me to leave poor Kal in the lurch like that!

Date: 2005-09-29 05:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] norwich36.livejournal.com
That was atmospheric and very, very hot. You really can't go wrong with sex slave Lex and virginal Clark! But I also loved the little details, like the aspects of Kryptonian culture, and the vivid description of the alien groping Lex.

Date: 2005-10-12 03:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Glad you liked this!

You really can't go wrong with sex slave Lex and virginal Clark!

Truer words have never been spoken! I can never resist a story with them in it.

I do hope to write more of this, and I have a lot of ideas about Kryptonian culture I'd like to explore. I just find the possibilities endlessly fascinating.

Date: 2005-09-29 06:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raincitygirl.livejournal.com
Oh my. *fans self* Wow, there are just so many places this could go, and most of them extremely smutty. I have to admit, I like that in a fic!

Date: 2005-10-12 09:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Hee! I'm rather a fan of the smut myself, I must say.

Dirty = Fun *g*

Glad you enjoyed this, doll!

Date: 2005-09-29 08:31 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] yavannauk.livejournal.com
Mmmm, so very hot even without getting to the sex. *fans self*

Date: 2005-10-12 09:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Glad you liked it, doll. I probably should be tired of writing about virgin Clark/Kal by now. But I'm not. *g*

Date: 2005-09-29 09:25 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] ender24
omg, please tell there is going to be a sequel!??!?!?

Date: 2005-10-12 09:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Definitely going to be more to this. Glad you liked it, doll!

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Date: 2005-09-29 10:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elsmoka.livejournal.com
hot hot hot! :)

where are they going???!!

Date: 2005-10-12 09:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I've definitely got to write more of this. It's so mean of me to leave poor virgin Kal in the lurch. *g*

Glad you liked this!
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