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Title: Two to Tango
Author: Lenore
Recipient: Melo
Fandom: Sportsnight

Note to Melo: I loved your Danny icon and couldn't resist it. But I've only seen, like, four episodes, so I hope I didn't get this too wrong! Also, I hope there's not too much baseball in it. *g*



This was written for this icon from [livejournal.com profile] melo_l's journal:



Two to Tango
By Lenore

There was an expression Dan got whenever Casey was reading his copy, like a third grader sitting on the edge of his seat, waiting for the teacher to hand back his homework. On anyone else, at least anyone who'd been a professional sports writer longer than fifteen minutes, it would have come off as embarrassingly insecure or annoyingly needy, but Dan had a knack for making what was at best irritating on other people seem oddly charming.

"So are you going to read it or not?" Dan asked, trying not to fidget, without much success.

"I am reading it, Danny."

"But you're not reading it."

"I can fully appreciate the elegance of your prose without reading it."

"But I can't."

Casey let out of his breath. "Fine. But keep in mind that I'm only doing this to indulge you."

"I have no problem with that, Casey. I'm tuned in to my inner child and ready to be spoiled rotten."

Casey forced back a smile, drawing on the self-discipline he'd learned as a parent, because, really, it was no better to encourage Danny than it was Charlie.

"All right. I'm reading it now." He took a deep breath and used his on-air voice. "If you can't dance, you can't hit, that's the common baseball wisdom. So it seems the reigning American League MVP Daniel Marte has developed a serious case of two-left feet, going 0 for 4 in today's game against the Angels, lowering his batting average to an ungainly .199."

Dan drummed his fingers impatiently. "Don't be intimidated by the brilliance. Feel free to lavish on the praise."

"When you say brilliance…?"

"Oh, come on, Case. You have to admit as leads go this one has style."

"If you can't dance you can't hit…when exactly did this become baseball wisdom?"

"When Rick Down said it around the batting cage that time I was covering the Yankees."

"And if it comes from a boozed up, repeatedly fired hitting coach…that makes it wise?"

"Allegedly boozed up, and you have to admit the man's got a point. Hitting is all a matter of rhythm--" He waved his hand in the air. "Like most important things."

Casey regarded him skeptically. "Such as?"

Dan pondered. "Well, sex, for one."

"Sex?"

"Sex."

"So if Daniel Marte can't dance and he can't hit…"

"You're free to draw your own conclusions." Danny grinned evilly. "There are those rumors about the big man using steroids, and it's well documented the effect that has on---you know, the size of a man's bat."

"I don't think I need to be having this conversation."

"Is that because you're feeling intimidated by the brilliance of my copy? I did warn you about that."

"You did, indeed."

"So…?"

"So that's one stylish lead you've got there. It has a good beat, and you can dance to it."

Dan took the paper back with a flourish. "You have excellent taste, my friend."

Natalie popped her head in the door. "Dan, they need you down in Editing."

"My invaluable expertise is required by our colleagues in the Editing department," Dan told Casey.

"I heard that somewhere."

"Lead story in the Post this morning," Natalie said, before ducking away.

"Later," Dan said.

"Later."

***

Casey assumed this was all he'd hear about dancing until they were actually on air, but he'd underestimated his partner's interest in the subject.

They were settled at the desk, getting some last minute fluffing from wardrobe and makeup, when Dan said, ""I've always thought you'd be a good dancer. You know, if you had the right partner."

Casey raised an eyebrow. "Excuse me?"

"I'm just saying."

"You're saying. Or you're saying?"

Danny grinned. "Relax, Case. I'm just saying."

"We're thirty seconds out," Mike started the countdown from the control room.

The rest of the staff cleared off.

"Have a good show everybody," Dana's voice came over the earpiece.

Dan shuffled his papers. Casey took a deep breath and sat up straighter.

"But are you saying something?" he asked.

Danny only smiled mysteriously.

"Fifteen seconds out," Mike said.

"So…when you say you think I'm a good dancer, would that be doing the boogey in a powder blue tuxedo at the prom good? Or rose in my teeth, look of determination doing the tango good?"

"Tango. Definitely."

"And you're sure you're not saying something here?"

Dan turned and looked him in the eye, his smile as serious as it was sweet. "I'm saying I'd dance a thousand steps for you, Casey."

"In five, four…"

"I was kind of hoping you were saying that," Casey whispered.

Danny grinned as Mike finished the count down, then he put on his professional sportscasting expression. "Good evening. From New York City, I'm Dan Rydell, alongside my partner Casey McCall. The old baseball wisdom goes that if you can't dance you can't hit…"

Casey couldn't say much about Dan's timing, and whether he had any rhythm or not was yet to be seen. But if dancing was anything like being friends, he had to believe they'd do a pretty mean two-step together.

Date: 2004-04-29 05:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thistle90.livejournal.com
Sadly I've never seen the show, but the story was adorable. Such a cute flirtation. And there's no such thing as too much baseball.

"And if it comes from a boozed up, repeatedly fired hitting coach…that makes it wise?"

*snickers* Oh Rick, how we don't miss you.

Date: 2004-04-29 11:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Well, there's never too much baseball for us, Thistle. I'm not sure about other people. *g*

Hee! When I got this icon, that quote by Rick Down was the first thing I thought of. Writing this was so much fun!

Date: 2004-04-29 08:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kassrachel.livejournal.com
Fucking fantastic!

I love this; I totally love this.

I've only seen season 1, but it sounds to me like you nailed the voices. And the slashy vibe! And the line about how Danny makes annoying things charming! ::clutches heart happily::

Yay.

Date: 2004-04-29 11:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Yay! I'm so glad you liked it! And thought it bore some resemblance to the characters on television. *g*

Yay again!

Date: 2004-04-29 10:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cosmic.livejournal.com
Squee! So cute!

Date: 2004-04-29 11:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Yay! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 2004-04-29 01:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melo-l.livejournal.com
"So…when you say you think I'm a good dancer, would that be doing the boogey in a powder blue tuxedo at the prom good? Or rose in my teeth, look of determination doing the tango good?"

Lenore, you're my new hero. Oh, wait, you already were. *g*

Seriously though. You manage to nail everything I love about Sports Night, Dan and Casey in less than a thousand words. You made me laugh, smile secretly at the way banter becomes this weird courtship ritual that is so them, and left me with a happy feeling that stayed with me for a long while.

In short? Love, love, love. *g*

Date: 2004-04-30 11:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Yay! Happy, happy, happy. I'm so glad you liked it, Melo. As I said, it's my first Sportsnight attempt, and I wasn't too sure about it. So...yay!

*hugs*

Date: 2004-04-29 06:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elvisneedsboats.livejournal.com
OHMYGOD! You wrote SN!

Now you need to go watch the rest of the show and write more!! Because this is really good!

*bounces happily*

Date: 2004-05-03 07:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Yay! Yay! I'm so glad you liked it. And thought it bore some resemblance to the show. *g*

It's definitely my plan to watch the rest of the episodes as soon as possible. I love this show!

Date: 2004-04-29 09:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] barely-bean.livejournal.com
ohmygod! You got them down in four episodes? Jesus Lenore, you're some kind of superficwritinggoddess! This is wonderfully smart, and sexy to boot, just like the show! WRITE MORE NOW! er, watch the eps first! But WRITE MORE!!!!

Date: 2004-05-03 07:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Awwwww! Caro! You say the sweetest things. I'm *so* glad you thought this worked.

Hee! It's definitely on my agenda to watch the rest of the episodes, and I've already been spinning more story ideas involving baseball. *g*

Date: 2004-05-01 08:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/oceana_/
This was great!
I haven't seen mayn episodes of Sports Night (yet), but from what I've seen, you wrote them exactly how they are onscreen.
Perfect voices, and that talking until a second before they go on air, which always makes me really nervous...
Oh, they'd dance alright, they are already dancing, aren't they. And they've definitely got rhythm.
I really liked this!

Date: 2004-05-03 07:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you thought this was in character for them, and I know exactly what you mean about it making you nervous that they talk until the last moment before they go on air. I have that same reaction!

Thanks *so* much for the feedback! When you're just getting starting writing in a fandom, it really, really helps.

Date: 2004-05-01 12:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] apathocles.livejournal.com
Saw the link at inthetallgrass.

I *adore* this story. The voices are absolutely perfect, and the two of them are just... aww. *happy sigh*

Date: 2004-05-03 07:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Yay! That's so nice to hear. The writing on Sports Night is so crisp and lively I found it really intimidating to try to write fan fiction about it!

I really, really appreciate the feedback! Thanks!

Date: 2004-05-01 02:14 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] celli
The smile on my face can not be believed. You have them down perfectly.

And I'm especially thrilled because I made that icon for Mel. :)

Date: 2004-05-03 07:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Awwww! It's such a wonderful icon, Celli. You do good work, my friend!

Yay! I'm so glad you liked this! And thought it captured something of the guys. I was really nervous about posting it!

Date: 2004-05-01 04:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] out-there.livejournal.com
*squees*

*bounces*

*hugs you*

Oh, this is... wonderful! Great dialogue, *perfect* SN feel, wonderfully understated ending. Totally felt like a scene straight out of the series, and I absolutely love the way that... you've made the entire fic so easy to read, so utterly effortless to imagine, to hear the sdialogue, to see Danny's facial expressions.

The ending is delightful, the banter is spot on, and the Casey-voice feels totally authentic. I loved this and it left me beaming.

*hugs you again*

Date: 2004-05-03 07:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I can't tell you how much I appreciate your feedback. It's kind of nerve-wracking the first time you write in a fandom, and since the writing on the show itself is so amazing, I was just totally intimidated!

I really appreciate the encouragement! *hugs*

Date: 2004-05-02 02:30 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] phoebesmum.livejournal.com
Dan had a knack for making what was at best irritating on other people seem oddly charming.

Doesn't he, though?

And you've only seen four episodes? I'm dying to see what happens when you've seen them all!

This was lovely - thank you!

Date: 2004-05-03 08:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Awwww! Thank you so much. I'm dying to watch the rest of the episodes. It's such a great show!

I really, really appreciate your feedback!

Date: 2004-05-02 08:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] flippet.livejournal.com
Dang, girl...this is good.

If this is what you come up with after only four eps, I can't wait to see what you do after the whole kit-n-caboodle.

*Dan: Does anyone actually say/i> 'kit-n-caboodle' any more?
Casey: Apparently, yes.*

Date: 2004-05-02 08:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] flippet.livejournal.com
And apparently, I can't get the darn html right. Don't mind me. Blecch.

Date: 2004-05-03 08:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Awwww! Thank you! I really appreciate the lovely feedback.

And hee! I can just imagine them discussing the modern usage of the term "kit-n-caboodle". Too funny!

Date: 2004-05-03 06:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meadowlion.livejournal.com
Eee! That's so wonderful, witty, sweet, and true -- both to their characters and to their emotions. I can't even choose a favorite part to quote; I adore it all. =D

Date: 2004-05-06 07:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Yay! I was kind of nervous posting this, it being my first
SN story and all, so thank you! Your feedback means a lot to me.

Date: 2004-06-10 08:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] octopussy.livejournal.com
One of the better SN fics I've stumbled upon in awhile because the comedic pacing was so good. I didn't feel you went to fast or too slow anywhere, and was left with the right sort of warm-squishy glow. ;D

Date: 2006-02-11 06:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hyperfocused.livejournal.com
So I'm responding to this one for the Valentine meme. You should know I love your SV fic, but when I saw this iisted, I just had to pick it.

I'm sorry to say there's one huge problem with it. Namely, that is isn't surrounded by lots of other Sports Night stories you've written, because damn, this is good. Really good, with a dead on Danny voice -- I'm still laughing at "I can fully appreciate the elegance of your prose without reading it."

"But I can't."--, and just the sweetest ending.

Date: 2006-02-13 01:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Awwww! *hugs* Glad you enjoyed this. I really like Sports Night. It's so a fabulousy written and acted show. So it was always daunting to consider writing fan fiction for it. Just made me nervous. So thank you so much for this lovely feedback. Made my day!

Date: 2006-02-11 08:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deirdre-c.livejournal.com
Just wandering through for Valentine's Day. I read all your Supernatural and WB-RPS, but when I saw this link to a Sports Night story in your memories, I had to check it out. All I can say is bravo! You have such an amazing ear for voices, your Dan is so perfectly Dan and Casey's spot-on, too. And I love the banter in all your stories, the pacing is so tight! Sorkin is tough to live up to, but you are right there with him! Love, love, love. I'm a huge SportsNight fan and you really got it! Happy Valentine's Meme! Please keep writing!

Date: 2006-02-13 02:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Thanks so much for the lovely feedback! So glad you enjoyed this. Sports Night is such smart, smart show I've always found the idea of writing fan fiction for it really kind of daunting. So it means so much to me that you think the voices and pacing were right. Thank you, thank you!

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