Holiday Fluff Advent Style: Day Twenty-One (The day I cheat!)

[scribblinlenore]

Today's offering is actually my story for undermistletoe, because...posting one story a day is enough of a challenge. *g*

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Title: 101 Ways To Get Lucky (In Love)
Fandom: SGA
Pairing: John/Rodney
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 18,000-ish

Prompt: Tyler Watts is rich, gorgeous and at the top of his game—except someone just moved the goalposts! Now Tyler realizes he is sorely lacking the one status symbol that everybody seems to have…the perfect wife and family. Tyler needs help, so he hires a relationship coach. Single-mom Mary is out of her depth with Tyler… She may be an expert, but not when it comes to her own relationships! And every day she spends with Tyler makes her wish that she could be the one to fill his vacancy for wife…

Notes: Big thanks to my science consultant mecurtin and lots of love to barely_bean for beta reading and encouragement all along the way. Also, I want to thank my prompt for being so fabulous! Never have I loved a prompt more! :)

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Comments

[mirichan.livejournal.com]

I loved this (took the fact I have a cold and feel lousy to just do nothing BUT read, including this one) and it was really great (much better than the prompt it's based on [thankfully]).

I just have a tiny problem with it and it's so tiny I wondered if there was any point raising it but oh well... Fruit loop. Their dog. Where is it?

First time John & Rodney are alone in the house (Sheppard Junior being out for the night)... no dog in sigh. Then Rodney and his cat mostly move in and nowhere is there a mention of how the dog reacted to their invasion. Like I said... tiny. But I did wonder...

[scribblinlenore.livejournal.com]

Poor Fruit Loop! I really didn't give him enough attention. But I like to imagine him like my family's dog. He loves people and cats, and when Rodney and Shroedinger move in, he quickly makes friends with the cat, and slathers love on Rodney until he gets over the disappointment of his dog running away when he was a kid, and then he and Fruit Loop are the best of pals. :)

[mirichan.livejournal.com]

*LOL*... good enough by me. Thanks (that just filled the blank that was annoying me in my little silly mind ^_^).