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Title: Three Visits and One Date
Fandom: SGA
Pairing: John/Rodney
Rating: NC-17
Summary: A follow up to House Call. If you haven't read that story, let me sum up: Rodney's working on a Millennium problem, and John's a hooker, and there's sex. And now…more sex. *g*



Three Visits and One Date
By Lenore

The thing with John becomes, well, a thing with John.

He takes to showing up at Rodney's place randomly, today like a whirlwind, through the door before Rodney manages even a perfunctory "come in," hands busy, clothes flying off. Well, Rodney's at least. John sprawls onto a chair, and Rodney is left standing there, naked and wondering how it is that John doesn't have so much as his shirt untucked. John smiles up at him lazily, and Rodney is about to ask "am I amusing you" when John beats him to the punch, "Touch yourself." John's legs are casually spread, and he runs his hand idly along the inseam of his jeans. God, Rodney feels that, like John is touching him, and his dick jerks to life. He reaches for himself, and John swirls his hand more languidly over worn denim. Just that sound could make Rodney hard. He rubs the head of his dick with his thumb, and John watches intently, eyes dark, all pupil. Work and self-consciousness and who's paying who--Rodney forgets about all of that. Forgets everything but John.

"Yeah, yeah, come on," John urges softly.

Rodney pushes into his fist, hips working eagerly, and then John is up like a shot, pulling his shirt over his head, going down on his knees. He runs his palm deliberately up Rodney's thigh and pushes away Rodney's hand, and then Rodney is thrusting all the more eagerly, once, twice, three times, before coming in John's hot, welcoming mouth.

***

The next visit, John is no less bossy, although he is more maddeningly intent on taking his time. Rodney begins to wonder if it's possible for a prostitute to have too much imagination, because, dear God, John has a vision. He opens Rodney's notebook and bends Rodney over his desk, fixing a throw pillow beneath his hips.

"Comfortable?"

Rodney can't exactly say "yes" when he has his ass up in the air. "You have some weird fixation, don't you?"

John settles into Rodney's office chair and rolls over behind him. The familiar clatter of the casters vibrates all down Rodney's spine. He thrusts against the pillow, already moaning, and he hasn't even been touched yet.

"Mmm." John kisses one cheek and then the other, his breath warm against Rodney's skin. "It's a really nice ass." He strokes his thumb along the crease. "So, explain to me what you're working on."

Rodney blinks. "What?"

John brushes his lips lightly along the curve of Rodney's ass. "I won't stop until you do." Then John's hands are spreading him apart, and John's tongue is even hotter than his breath.

"Fuck!" Rodney grabs for the edge of the desk, gripping until his knuckles turn white.

"Talk," John instructs, and goes back to eating him out.

Rodney startles into an explanation of the Hodge Conjecture. John makes noises like he's really enjoying what he's doing, and Rodney keeps on babbling, although after a while, a short while, he has no idea what any of it means.

***

Sometimes, it's all simple seduction. John comes sauntering in, smiling that smile, and he takes Rodney's face in his hands. As they kiss, Rodney realizes with a start that he's missed him.

John loses his clothes on the way to the bedroom, leaving the erotic version of a breadcrumb trail in his wake, so beautifully unselfconscious in his nakedness that Rodney has to swallow around a lump in his throat. In the doorway, John looks back over his shoulder. "You coming?"

Rodney stumbles after him, and John lies down on the bed, spreads his legs. He doesn't say "fuck me," but then, he doesn't have to. Rodney kicks off his pants, nearly tripping over them in his hurry to get to John. Rodney kisses John's neck, and gets him ready, and when Rodney moves inside him, John sucks in his breath sharply and then lets out a little sigh, as if he doesn't do this all the time, as if there's only the two of them.

***

Naturally, Rodney notices when John stops charging him for their evenings together. He's just not sure what to make of it. Are they dating? Or does John simply have no head for business?

Rodney gets his answer when John calls to ask, "Hey, you want to come over tonight? Maybe watch a movie or something? I have Bladerunner." He adds in a tone just a little too consciously casual, "When was the last time you got out?"

Rodney stutters through "yeah, sure, sounds good," and John gives him the address, and when Rodney shows up at his door that night, ringing the doorbell, he feels vaguely like he's doing something wrong.

John appears in the doorway, the usual black T-shirt and jeans, hair as messy as ever, his typically sleepy expression, but still, there's something different. Rodney just can't quite put his finger on it. John pushes the door open wider, and Rodney follows him inside.

"Beer?"

He nods, and John goes to fetch it from the kitchen. Rodney drifts around the living room, perusing the bookshelves. Aeronautical engineering textbooks and back issues of Scientific American, and when John returns, Rodney greets him with an accusatory glare of you've been holding out on me.

John hands over the beer and shrugs. "Things didn't exactly work out like I'd planned. Maybe I'll tell you about it sometime."

That's almost like a commitment, at least what passes for it between the two of them, and Rodney nervously swigs his beer. John avoids Rodney's gaze, and there's none of his usual effortless mastery, no take your clothes off or I'm going to go down on you now, okay? Rodney is pretty sure he's the only client, current or former, that John has ever invited into his home.

"So, um," Rodney clears his throat, "Bladerunner?"

"Oh. Yeah. Right."

They settle onto the sofa, but Rodney can't relax, not sure how close to sit or whether it's okay to touch. Things have never been awkward between them before. John fishes out the remote control from beneath a cushion and starts the movie. Rodney does his best to pay attention, but John is a warm, good-smelling distraction, restlessly shifting positions, the play of muscle beneath his clothes more interesting than anything on screen.

They're maybe halfway through the film when John thinks to offer, "Hey, I could make popcorn. You know, if you want."

Rodney nods, mostly just to have something to do. "Sure. That would be-- good."

John goes, comes back with a big bowl, unpauses the movie. A moment later, though, he sighs. "I'm-- not very good at this."

Rodney turns to look, and John's expression is uncharacteristically tense, and suddenly, Rodney gets it. John is on uncertain ground here, not playing a role or putting on a show or doing a job. Just…being John.

Rodney snatches away the popcorn bowl. "Well, you can share the snacks for a start."

John relaxes into a grin. "I can do that."

By the time the movie is over, it's started to go dark outside. They measure each other in the dim light from the TV screen, and then John reaches for Rodney, and they're kissing. Soft and lazy and easy. They have time.

John stands and leads Rodney by the hand down the hall. His bedroom is spare--white walls, tidily made bed, bare floor. They take off their clothes and climb beneath the covers, and the sex is rather touchingly vanilla. They kiss, and John smiles at Rodney, and they rub off against each other.

"If you're here in the morning, I'll make pancakes," John murmurs sleepily when they're done, his leg draped across Rodney's.

"I like pancakes," Rodney says after some consideration.

For him, that's quite a declaration.

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Date: 2007-06-10 04:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sheafrotherdon.livejournal.com
Awwwwww. Aw that's such a perfect Sunday morning read. *sigh*

Date: 2007-06-23 03:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked this! I'm just to much of a sap not to believe they'd go from hooker/john to boyfriends. *g*

Date: 2007-06-10 04:54 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] tharaist.livejournal.com
*sighs happily*

Damn, that was lovely!

Date: 2007-06-23 03:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you liked this! I don't know what it says about me, but I do enjoy writing hooker!John.

Okay, okay, so maybe I DO know what it says about me. *bg*

Date: 2007-06-10 04:59 pm (UTC)

Date: 2007-06-23 03:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Just the reaction I was hoping for! :)

Date: 2007-06-10 05:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raincitygirl.livejournal.com
Oh man, so good. So schmoopy, but with an edge to it.

Mind you, I'd like to get a little more insight into John's mind here. What about Rodney has him not charging, and inviting him over for movie night? Maybe it's on purpose, because it's done from Rodney's POV and he doesn't really get it yet himself,b ut I do find myself quite curious.

Date: 2007-06-10 05:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raincitygirl.livejournal.com
Oh, and re: how things "didn't work out" for John, was he studying aeronautical engineering while in the Air Force and got kicked out under DADT? If they'd paid for his undergrad and his five-year service commitment wasn't up yet, he would've been on the hook to pay them back for part of his education. Could be one explanation why he didn't segueway into grad school.

Damnit, now I'm getting really curious about how John ended up in this particular profession.

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Date: 2007-06-10 05:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] villainny.livejournal.com
That's really lovely. :D

Date: 2007-06-23 03:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you liked this! I just can't resist writing hooker!John. *g*

Date: 2007-06-10 05:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dogeared.livejournal.com
Ohhh, I love how they just fall into this thing together, and suddenly there's some kind of routine and some kind of commitment and some kind of declaration, oh boys.

Date: 2007-06-23 03:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I really would have to vote them the most likely to "accidentally" get married to each other. *g*

I'm so glad you liked this, doll!

Date: 2007-06-10 05:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadowserenity.livejournal.com
Ooh. Instant soft spot for this AU. I thought it was fantastic :). I especially liked when John admitted he didn't know how to do dating, just acting.

I feel greedy asking (but it only shows how much I love your work, right?), but do you have any continuation ideas in your head?

Date: 2007-06-23 03:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked this! John always seems so much more comfortable playing a role than being himself, so, really, he'd make a fine hooker. *coughs*

I might try to write another part that's from John's POV. I do think there would be some bumps in the road as they settle into a relationship. It's hard to imagine Rodney isn't going to have problems with John continuing to turn tricks now that they're involved. So...yeah, maybe I will write more!

Date: 2007-06-10 05:19 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] anatsuno.livejournal.com
hot and lovely! otpsmush, yes, thank you.

Date: 2007-06-23 03:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked this! Writing hooker!John is always good times for me. *g*

Date: 2007-06-10 05:22 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] wildestranger.livejournal.com
Aww, lovely. :)

Date: 2007-06-23 03:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked this! I really am too much of a sap not to have them go from hooker/john to boyfriends. :)

Date: 2007-06-10 05:33 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] monanotlisa.livejournal.com
Beautiful -- I always wish you wrote longer stories, but this is more of an idle wish; your stories may be on the short side, but they're always organically structured and complete.

Date: 2007-06-23 03:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Ah, man, I wish I wrote longer stories, but I've finally just come to accept that it's not my thing.

...your stories may be on the short side, but they're always organically structured and complete.

Thank you! That's the best kind of compliment.

Date: 2007-06-10 05:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] daybright.livejournal.com
I like it, its hot : )

Date: 2007-06-23 03:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked this!

Date: 2007-06-10 05:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] feliz581.livejournal.com
Oh boys - adorably, awkwardly doing a retroactive dating! Precious!

Date: 2007-06-23 03:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
They just never do these things the way other people do! *g*

Date: 2007-06-10 05:45 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] lamardeuse.livejournal.com
Loved this snippet when you first posted it, and I'm so glad to see it continue! :)

Date: 2007-06-23 03:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
It's hard for me to leave hooker!John alone. Um...*coughs*

I'm glad you liked this!

Date: 2007-06-10 05:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] torakowalski.livejournal.com
*melts* Oh, this is lovely.

Date: 2007-06-23 03:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Awww, thanks! I'm so glad you liked this. :)

Date: 2007-06-10 05:54 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] yavannauk.livejournal.com
Oh, that's gorgeous. I love the way John is so awkward and out of his depth on their date.

Date: 2007-06-23 03:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked this, doll! John always seems more comfortable playing a role than being himself. I figured that would be only more so if he were a sex worker.

Date: 2007-06-10 05:57 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] amalthia
loved this story. :)

Date: 2007-06-23 03:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Glad you liked this, doll! I'm too much of a romantic not to have them go from hooker/john to boyfriends. :)

Date: 2007-06-10 05:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] madeline871.livejournal.com
It's stories like this that feed my growing love for hooker!John. And pancakes too!

Date: 2007-06-10 06:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ifylla.livejournal.com
In the morning, Rodney eats pancakes off of hooker!John's body, drizzles maple syrup along his body and licks it off, melts pats of butter on John's chest and follows the buttery trails with his fingers

"told you I like pancakes," Rodney whispers, and God, John likes pancakes, too.

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Date: 2007-06-10 06:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mcalex22.livejournal.com
I had to re-read House Call as I can't remember if I'd read it or not. I just love passion and sex between them as much as I love the relationship and comical aspects.

It's sweet and cute. Thanks for sharing :)

Date: 2007-06-23 03:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you liked these stories! In any fandom I'm in, I just have to write at least one hooker story. I can't help myself! *g*

Date: 2007-06-10 06:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ifylla.livejournal.com
yay! oh, Hooker!John, you are so sensitive, you know maths and Rodney loves you for both your heads!

(is totally reading/writing this all with little almost-homophobic brother in the room)

Date: 2007-06-23 03:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
LOL! That must have been a little awkard, having this story and your little brother in the same room.

I'm glad you liked it!

Date: 2007-06-10 06:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anitac588.livejournal.com
Awww, Lenore, you're such a romantic soul... I'm melting here.
Lovely story, hot, but still so very sweet. (And hooker!John! What's not to love!)

Date: 2007-06-23 03:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Ah, Anita, I'm such a big sap. I just can't help myself! And yes, yes, I have to agree. What's not to love about hooker!John? He'd just...be so GOOD at it. *g*

Date: 2007-06-10 06:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bbuttercup.livejournal.com
Love this :o)

Date: 2007-06-23 03:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm so glad! :)

Date: 2007-06-10 06:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shara50.livejournal.com
That was wonderful.

Date: 2007-06-23 03:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :)

Date: 2007-06-10 06:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] krisdia.livejournal.com
Hot and aww and hooker!John = ♥!

Date: 2007-06-23 03:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
John would make such a good hooker! *g*

Date: 2007-06-10 07:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elsmoka.livejournal.com
I LOVE IT!!!

Date: 2007-06-23 03:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
Yay! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Date: 2007-06-10 07:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lanthano.livejournal.com
Awww, lovely.

Date: 2007-06-23 03:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribblinlenore.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked it! I really am a sap. I can't help it!
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